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Breathe Anew

The last thing I remember 
since the day our love began
was thinking what they say of love
was really just a sham.
A fantasy we want to be
that helps us to get by,
steeped in its illusions
by how well we live the lie.

Hoping still I'd someday find
the perfect one for me,
who understood 
my thoughts and dreams 
and who I want to be,
one dawning day we said hello
and recognized a change,
mirrors of a kindred soul
so comfortingly strange.

As though we both 
knew right away
our paths were meant to cross,
we started telling secrets
sharing pain we knew of loss.
Noticing new things we feel
with never more to say,
the more we sought 
to share our time
the more I hoped you'd stay.

All I knew of happiness 
had somehow been reborn,
shedding veils of life's regret
brought feelings deep and warm.
What it means to live
had changed
I knew I'd found the one,
as if again to breathe anew
as life had just begun.

The last thing I remember 
since the day our love began
was thinking what they say of love
was really just a sham.
Now I know a lovers glow
is more than fantasy,
It's everything I ever hoped 
and dreamed true love would be.

                               - Jeannie Minor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/4/2021 1:00:00 PM
I've never read anyone who can express their feelings so beautifully. This is heartfelt honesty. Super penning! I am impressed, Jeannie:) However, I do know of your incomparable talent. Be well.
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Date: 1/3/2018 2:19:00 PM
Smashing penned piece Jeannie, great to read your penning again. Hope you had nice Christmas and have blessed 2018, Gordon
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/3/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Gordon, Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2018 5:54:00 PM
What do you mean about red meat?
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/2/2018 9:10:00 PM
I will email.
Date: 1/2/2018 5:17:00 PM
Probably the last line. Might want to turn it into two sentences...
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/2/2018 5:20:00 PM
Thanks, you got any red meat for me? Something to make me dig a little deeper?
Date: 1/2/2018 4:19:00 PM
Sounds great Jeannie...It's what you make it...All the best
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/2/2018 5:17:00 PM
Hi Arturo, thanks for the visit. Feel free to give me some honest critique.
Date: 1/2/2018 2:37:00 PM
Happy you have found real love... Well written Jeannie..
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 1/2/2018 5:15:00 PM
Thanks S.O. Looking for critique on this one if you have any.

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