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Breathe

the air is scented with swiss hazelnut coffee a rich aroma stimulating my senses to drink it ... or just to breathe

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2013 1:10:00 AM

Still love this one! Good night now. joe went to sleep so I am down here some more. haha.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/22/2013 6:34:00 PM

A lovely poem with a nice surprise ending... "or just to breathe". Very nice flair to your work :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2013 11:57:00 AM

Ahhh!! Oh the aroma..I can smell it here..Great descriptive work...Thanks for the consoling words on Gail's blog..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 6/16/2013 10:00:00 AM

I'm not drinking coffee at all. I'm only drinking milk but while reading this it seems that I want to taste it esp. this swiss hazelnut you've described in your very beautiful and amazing tanka my dear friend Francine. Thank you so much for sharing & your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. Have a blessed wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Christine Phillips

Date: 6/8/2013 6:08:00 PM

"to drink it ... or just to breathe" very strong line. A beautiful poem

Cathy Moore

Date: 6/8/2013 5:41:00 PM

Great

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/7/2013 10:21:00 PM

A coffee company is located not too far from me. You should drive by there if you like the rich aroma of the stuff. Good write as usual Francine.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2013 6:46:00 PM

oh gosh, it's been a while since I saw your poetry if I missed this one. It's very pleasant. I am not a coffee drinker but I like its aroma when I enter Barnes and nobles book store!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/3/2013 12:01:00 PM

Love hazelnuts, love coffee , this I have to love xx

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/31/2013 12:54:00 PM

A sweet aroma. One of Gods favorite sences .

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/30/2013 4:05:00 PM

ahhhh.......either way.........I can't do without my coffee!!!.......mmmmm