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Breathe

A Minute Of your heart Is all I need In order to breathe You are my very breath It's your beauty I inhale You fill my lungs with blind desire You're the ambrosia that feeds my soul Without your love I have no need to breathe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Larry. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 12:11:00 AM
If I may say so, Larry! This etheree sure leaves one breathless ;) --congrats on your win! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:12:00 PM
Beautiful!!! Just beautiful. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:54:00 PM
Ah, the food of the gods. I love it! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 12:00:00 PM
Good use of this challenging form for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on placing third in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:30:00 AM
Larry the comical genius is also a master at the art of love- this is beautiful, Larry. Quite intense. Really like this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:20:00 AM
My goodness. You wax poetic even in these abbreviated poems. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:39:00 AM
This was very romantic, Larry. Congratulations on your third place win in my contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:46:00 PM
Great etheree, Larry. Nice job. ...Ralph
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:45:00 PM
Great etheree, Larry. Nice job. ...Ralph
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:02:00 PM
Quite beautiful, I enjoyed reading this lovely poem.....Karla
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:39:00 AM
Yes wow! thanks for the enjoyment of your Etheree poem.-Irma
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:31:00 AM
Wow!! A pyramid of pure passion. I predict a win. Love, Joyce
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