Breathe

A 
Minute
Of your heart
Is all I need
In order to breathe
You are my very breath
It's your beauty I inhale
You fill my lungs with blind desire
You're the ambrosia that feeds my soul
Without your love I have no need to breathe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Larry. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 12:11 AM
If I may say so, Larry! This etheree sure leaves one breathless ;) --congrats on your win! --nikko :)
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June 20, 2010 at 8:12 PM
Beautiful!!! Just beautiful. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
Spence Sr Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Ah, the food of the gods. I love it! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Good use of this challenging form for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on placing third in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
Green Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Larry the comical genius is also a master at the art of love- this is beautiful, Larry. Quite intense. Really like this one. Congrats on your win.
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 7:20 AM
My goodness. You wax poetic even in these abbreviated poems. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 3:39 AM
This was very romantic, Larry. Congratulations on your third place win in my contest. LUv, Andrea
Taylor Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 7:46 PM
Great etheree, Larry. Nice job. ...Ralph
Taylor Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Great etheree, Larry. Nice job. ...Ralph
Null Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 5:02 PM
Quite beautiful, I enjoyed reading this lovely poem.....Karla
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June 7, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Yes wow! thanks for the enjoyment of your Etheree poem.-Irma
Johnson Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Wow!! A pyramid of pure passion. I predict a win. Love, Joyce
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