Breathe

Breathe my name on the wind and you’ll find me
In those soft shivers
That murmur in the dark
That rustling whisper of laughs
We tried so hard to conceal
As we tiptoed out into to the moonlight

Sigh my name under the stars and you’ll find me
Where we wrestled and rolled in passions embrace
under the lunar light in her shimmering velvet skies

Utter my name on bated breath and I will find you
Feeling you gasp as I take your hand in mine
Your sparkling eyes …
Your triumphant grin, your hearts rat-a-tatting drumbeat roll
You guessed you may find me, where you never had before

Under your skin you felt me,
Felt my breath on your neck as we shared sweet secrets,
As I felt you breathe in my gasp that first time,
and utter out a gentle whisper of reassurance on a blissful sigh
….a murmur of devotion as you reached your peak, tumbling into ecstasy
Waking to the first rays of dawn, sunrise never better than in your arms
hand in hand we stammered our farewells…

I carried you with me in my heart… as you have carried me under your skin
… yes I remember
after all this time I still feel you … as you feel me
A slow smile and all angst disappears 
we melt to one, united in embrace
This gentle spark igniting a furnace of passion 
soaring on fiery wings of ardour’s clashing titans
Through fervors blazing heat 
only one thought cuts the suffocating intensity
…..Breathe…

03.05.2021
 
Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France
(Prompt Words: Breathe, Utter, Sigh, Whisper, Murmur, Gasp)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/26/2022 9:35:00 AM
Not much I can add here, Melody, that has not already been written...apart to say what a magnificent write this is -- and so elegantly expressed! Pure poetry at its sensuous best. My very warmest regards, Melody. Till next time. :) john
Login to Reply
Wiggett Avatar
Melody Wiggett
Date: 3/8/2022 11:48:00 PM
:)Wow, I can't tell you how I appreciate that John:) I'm soo glad you enjoyed it :) Thank you :)
Date: 5/4/2021 8:04:00 AM
Wonderful writing... I love it. God bless you, dear friend. Love, Gina
Login to Reply
Wiggett Avatar
Melody Wiggett
Date: 5/4/2021 11:25:00 AM
:) I’m soo happy you enjoyed it Gina :) thank you soo much :)
Date: 5/3/2021 7:35:00 AM
Yes, passionate is the first word that comes to mind, excellent penning, Melody. Good luck!
Login to Reply
Wiggett Avatar
Melody Wiggett
Date: 5/3/2021 9:45:00 AM
Aww thank you soo much Daniel:) I appreciate that:)
Date: 5/3/2021 6:46:00 AM
This is such a beautiful verse, Melody, romantic and passionate, the lover's sensual secrets know only to the moon. I enjoyed this very much. John
Login to Reply
Wiggett Avatar
Melody Wiggett
Date: 5/3/2021 9:44:00 AM
Wow:) thank you soo much John:) I’m really happy that you enjoyed it:)
Date: 5/3/2021 6:28:00 AM
Melody, this is beautifully written! Filled with steamy passion and romance! Best wishes in contest. Blessings, Kim M
Login to Reply
Wiggett Avatar
Melody Wiggett
Date: 5/3/2021 6:36:00 AM
Aww thank you sooooo much Kim:) I appreciate that soo much! Im soo glad you enjoyed it:)
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad