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Breath of Spring

Inhale ballets of swaying spring fragrance. Perfumery leaps upon warm breezes, swirling her into spingtide's guided dance~ gentle caresses, romantic teases. Soars of bird encores sing, fresh wings flapping, zephyr of evergreen upon each waft. Redemption and love's lungs overlapping sun brushed breath of lilac floating aloft. Youth of spring rejuvenates, green abounds! Ahh, fresh grass clipping whiffs sift through warm air. Hugging beauty's arbor, sweetness surrounds; climbing roses and wisteria flair. Lilies and tulips lean into a kiss. Breath of spring welcoming aroma's bliss! 3-12-2021

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Date: 4/24/2021 7:42:00 PM
Beautiful. Loved your last two lines. Congratulations Juliet!
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Date: 4/23/2021 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 4/23/2021 10:08:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Juliet and the cute wordplay tulips (two lips) lean into a kiss, loved this one, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 3/29/2021 2:17:00 PM
Good rhyme in this one. It captures so much of the essence of spring. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/18/2021 2:43:00 PM
Juliet, back with congratulations on your win! I love your imagery and the feeling of the ballet dance in the breath of spring!
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Date: 3/13/2021 11:55:00 AM
Juliet, your words convey the jumping up joy of spring. Wonderful movement in your sonnet "ballet!" Best wishes for the contest.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/13/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, Sam. I appreciate it.
Date: 3/12/2021 11:26:00 AM
Juliet, this is a lovely piece of work. It shows wonderful creativity with beautiful images. Good luck in the contest. I see a winner here.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/13/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, L Milton.
Date: 3/12/2021 10:20:00 AM
Nice!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/13/2021 1:33:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.

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