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Breath of Spring

I feel her coming, and upon my nape she’s brushing me! Oh my, I have been kissed! I know she will get stronger. Then she’ll drape the trees with all the colors I have missed since last she visited. How nice she is. She brings such beauty, and sweet fragrance too. A bit rambunctious, sometimes she can whiz right past me, swishing leaves. And skies once blue might darken then, but when the rains come down, I know they are her way to bless us more, for grass that in the winter had been brown becomes lush green. Come, Flowers I adore - my pretty Roses – Let the breath of Spring revive you as the hills with birds’ song ring. March 8, 2021 For the Breath Of Spring Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh

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Date: 4/9/2021 12:08:00 AM
Very descriptive work about spring in all her glory. It has finally arrived. Congrats on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/6/2021 10:45:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me yearn for such season in our 'Springless' residence. God bless you.
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Date: 3/17/2021 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Andrea! I love brushing your nape with a kiss :) Linda
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Date: 3/17/2021 8:44:00 AM
Congrats. How lovely, my friend. Blessings.
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Date: 3/16/2021 12:55:00 PM
Back with congratulations Andrea, a well deserved win with your beautiful Spring sonnet... Belle
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Date: 3/16/2021 12:02:00 PM
This is so amazing... a beautiful joyous write that I love and appreciate. Thank you so much for entering it. I love it. Congrats on your win and know you're very much appreciated! Love and prayers and God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 3/10/2021 7:21:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, I enjoyed how you described spring as a person. I love everything about the season. From the colors, the smell and “the fresh start vibe” You did a great expressing what all is about. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/9/2021 9:23:00 PM
This is very lovely Andrea. My roses are already blooming and going a little crazy. I have been bringing a new bud in every day. We’ve been getting some rain here which I also love. I wanted to write a poem and enter this contest but so far nothing has come to me. I think I am too concerned about getting my income taxes ready for my CPA next week. I am sure this poem will do very well. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/9/2021 2:26:00 PM
A sonnet from Queen Andrea is always a sweet gift, but never more than when she is rhapsodizing about the queen of seasons. Love the draping of trees with colors, the rains as a blessing, the flowers returning, and the grand finale of birdsong ringing over the hills. Exquisite, my friend. Adding to my faves.
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Date: 3/9/2021 11:32:00 AM
Excellent Andrea. You express what we all wait anxiously for. Well done. God luck. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/9/2021 10:28:00 AM
You really capture the satisfaction one feels when spring finally arrives, Andrea. A lovely sonnet. Best wishes in Regina's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2021 9:54:00 AM
This feels so spring like! "A bit rambunctious, sometimes she can whiz right past me, swishing leaves." Wow!
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Date: 3/9/2021 5:27:00 AM
Much joy emanates from your poem, Andrea! True longing and anticipation of spring. A winning poem !
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Date: 3/9/2021 3:54:00 AM
Woww... what a beautiful, colourful, fresh breath of spring Andrea. Sure a FAV... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/8/2021 11:31:00 PM
A bit rambunctious poem but finely done in your most excellent way :)
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Date: 3/8/2021 10:36:00 PM
How beautiful!!! This is going to be in the top list, I bet...
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Date: 3/8/2021 8:25:00 PM
Andrea, What a wonderful Spring you've described in this Sonnet's breath. -Richard
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Date: 3/8/2021 8:14:00 PM
Refreshingly beautiful!! Here in Busan spring has come..Soon the scents of cherry blossoms will fill the air. Best wishes in yhe contest..Definitely a FAVE!!
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Date: 3/8/2021 3:26:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet Andrea, can’t wait for all those lovely things that arrive with the breath of Spring. Best wishes ~ Belle
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Date: 3/8/2021 3:02:00 PM
Nice imagery clothed in a fine sonnet. Best of luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 3/8/2021 2:44:00 PM
gorgeous personification in your super sonnet:-) hugs jan xx
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