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written on October 2, 2023

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Like a heavy dew, the morning brings dripping leaves, Sighing softly and leaning into the whisper of dawn, Lingering quietly in the echoes of sunlight falling gently, Singing a liquid kiss over the boughs and branches, Reflecting the intimacy of melancholy risking its breath Comforting hasty winds with the remains of last night’s shadows

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Date: 10/20/2023 9:49:00 AM
"Leaning into the whisper of dawn!" Just one of your many beautiful, poetic pictures, Gina, along with "echoes of sunlight!" Using "heavy dew" this becomes a delightful metaphoric write about healing and consolation! Congratulations on your win, sweet friend! Hugs and blessings!
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Date: 10/12/2023 2:12:00 PM
Wonderful write Gina, congrats on your hm in the contest.
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Date: 10/3/2023 7:28:00 PM
Such tender verse that moves the heart to sigh and reflect. Enjoyed this, Regina!
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Date: 10/3/2023 8:06:00 AM
Regina, I'm just sighing, loving this poem.
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Date: 10/2/2023 10:12:00 AM
Regina, this is wonderful, nicely done!
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:01:00 AM
Such a soothing piece. Thanks for your visit this morning. Blessings Richard.
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