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written on October 2, 2023

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Breath of Rain

Like a heavy dew, the morning brings dripping leaves, Sighing softly and leaning into the whisper of dawn, Lingering quietly in the echoes of sunlight falling gently, Singing a liquid kiss over the boughs and branches, Reflecting the intimacy of melancholy risking its breath Comforting hasty winds with the remains of last night’s shadows
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Kauffman Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 9:49 AM
"Leaning into the whisper of dawn!" Just one of your many beautiful, poetic pictures, Gina, along with "echoes of sunlight!" Using "heavy dew" this becomes a delightful metaphoric write about healing and consolation! Congratulations on your win, sweet friend! Hugs and blessings!
Hamilton Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Wonderful write Gina, congrats on your hm in the contest.
Leiser Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Such tender verse that moves the heart to sigh and reflect. Enjoyed this, Regina!
Bayles Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Regina, I'm just sighing, loving this poem.
Hughes Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Regina, this is wonderful, nicely done!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Such a soothing piece. Thanks for your visit this morning. Blessings Richard.
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