Breath of Love

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A breath of love lifts the butterfly
'Pon delicate wings
Where a gentle current carries
It like a reigning king

There is a breath of love that sings
Lasting tunes to the throngs
As the birds of the day and night
Chirp from where they belong

There is a breath of love that sees
All that is right and wrong
And weeps soft raindrops at the harm
That breath to heal so longs

Soon that breath of love will call down
To hurting humanity
Come in the safety of the fold
To live eternally  

Sponsor: Gail A. Doyle
Contest: Breath Of Love
Written: February 7, 2015
Kind of Poulter's Measure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/10/2015 6:06:00 PM
I think you hit a homerun with this one. It's right up Gail's alley!!!
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:57:00 PM
Sara, such a beautifully-written and inspiring poem that flows so smoothly. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:53:00 PM
Dear Poetess Sara, how beautiful this piece is! I am so enthralled by the lovely imagery, flow and woderful rhyming patterns. Warmest regards. Pandita.
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Date: 2/9/2015 9:23:00 AM
This flows with such beauty, Sara, and the form will impress as well. A sure winner !!
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:07:00 PM
Sara, the beauty of this poem is overwhelming, you have created something wondrous, a sure winner in the contest and thanks for always supporting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:34:00 PM
Excellent write, Sara! The first line already sets the trend for what is to follow. The final two line ... inspiring! #7 // paul
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Date: 2/7/2015 1:38:00 PM
Hey girl, I certainly haven't read as much as your previous poetry as I used to do Sara. Your poetry has climbed the ladder so much, that it's always a delight to read you. Good luck in the contest with this gem, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 12:03:00 PM
Such beautiful gentle imagery and spiritually uplifting - i think this will do well for you with Gail:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 10:22:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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