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A breath of love lifts the butterfly 'Pon delicate wings Where a gentle current carries It like a reigning king There is a breath of love that sings Lasting tunes to the throngs As the birds of the day and night Chirp from where they belong There is a breath of love that sees All that is right and wrong And weeps soft raindrops at the harm That breath to heal so longs Soon that breath of love will call down To hurting humanity Come in the safety of the fold To live eternally Sponsor: Gail A. Doyle Contest: Breath Of Love Written: February 7, 2015 Kind of Poulter's Measure

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Date: 2/10/2015 6:06:00 PM
I think you hit a homerun with this one. It's right up Gail's alley!!!
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:57:00 PM
Sara, such a beautifully-written and inspiring poem that flows so smoothly. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:53:00 PM
Dear Poetess Sara, how beautiful this piece is! I am so enthralled by the lovely imagery, flow and woderful rhyming patterns. Warmest regards. Pandita.
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Date: 2/9/2015 9:23:00 AM
This flows with such beauty, Sara, and the form will impress as well. A sure winner !!
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:07:00 PM
Sara, the beauty of this poem is overwhelming, you have created something wondrous, a sure winner in the contest and thanks for always supporting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:34:00 PM
Excellent write, Sara! The first line already sets the trend for what is to follow. The final two line ... inspiring! #7 // paul
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Date: 2/7/2015 1:38:00 PM
Hey girl, I certainly haven't read as much as your previous poetry as I used to do Sara. Your poetry has climbed the ladder so much, that it's always a delight to read you. Good luck in the contest with this gem, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 12:03:00 PM
Such beautiful gentle imagery and spiritually uplifting - i think this will do well for you with Gail:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 10:22:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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