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Breath of Love

The life that breathes in me would be no more If the breath of love would not have been shown to me Life did push me to my knees, living did become sore But that spark of love did revive my soul willingly I did not ask for it I expected not to be given such a treat I did choose the worst Hoping it would quench my soul's thirst But when love shone, I melted away Caring not whether the skies remained blue or grey For love of such kind is given to few Love of such kind is the only kind of love that is true Armed with it, I now can smile once again For its breath did blow away my pain Life is now made of sweetness That Love did wash away its bitterness! Love, love, love, being the cause of everything Love, being so true, so fulfilling To my beloved I shall say thus, thank you for your breath If not for it, I would have indeed already met with my death!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/20/2015 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations! You deserve it.
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Date: 12/17/2015 12:49:00 PM
A.G., CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/16/2015 6:04:00 AM
Hi Anoucheka. Congrats for your top placement in the Favorite Love Poem contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/15/2015 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your first-place win. Janice
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/15/2015 1:04:00 PM
Thks Janice :)
Date: 12/15/2015 11:48:00 AM
Congrats on first place very well deserved.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/15/2015 1:04:00 PM
Thks so much for the appreciation John :)
Date: 12/15/2015 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place of the contest Anoucheka.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/15/2015 1:05:00 PM
Thk you Nayda :)

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