Breath of Love

I had some pickled onions,
With stilton cheese and garlic bread:
This breath of love is just for you!
(Although you gag and turn your head…)

for Gayle's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Babcock Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 6:23 PM
Had me chuckling as I ate some garlic last night and hubby didn't so I think I must have stunk all night. A cute poem. love phyl
Neels Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Hehehe you had me all smiles with this one Jack ;) really good to read you tonight
Thirtyseven Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Loving the love. What a fire cracker of a crack-up. Nice words.
Horsman Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Ha,ha brilliant Jack, a recipe for rejection. love this
La France Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 7:32 AM
Jack, onions and garlic together in one kiss, yuk, best of luck and thanks so much for your forever support of my poetry ~~
Thomas Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 6:25 AM
Ewww.... The smell of garlic!!! But a very smart and unique write that I Thoroughly enjoyed!! A sure 7 from me :) and best of luck for the contest
Maverick Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 2:56 PM
I hope you are not serious Jack..' come to think on it I wondered why that statue has its head turned on my lawn..' I do declare I think you getting me paranoid..!
Mcdaid Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 4:46 PM
a delightful piece smiling very beautifully penned jack
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 9:14 PM
A humorous entry for the contest. Funny skits have been made from akward situations like this. Think I would pop out a breath mint for myself and offer one to the offender too. Haha. Garlic can save lives, but I usually use the orderless kind in pill form. G l in the contest Jack!
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 2:43 PM
The humor might win the contest but not the affection of the ladies..Ha!! Ha!!!Thanksfor all the comments..Sara
La France Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Jack, this is delightfully fun, I avoid garlic at all costs for this very reason, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
Relish Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 8:57 PM
Lol... enjoyed your take on the topic... regards,nad!
Johnson Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Well can you blame me? If I didn't, I'd probably be dead. :)
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Funny take on the topic. Check out my entry.
Hamilton Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 5:44 PM
lol great humour Jack gl in contest hugs
Callus Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 3:27 PM
This is a very worthy entry for the contest, Jack! Good to see you posting again. I adore any kind of smelly cheese ... and garlic! but my wife does not quite like my tastes:) // paul
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 3:19 PM
ha ha ha - mmmm I have to admit I ADORE Stilton cheese and garlic bread but not together ... not too fussed on the pickled onions - prefer beetroot lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx a 7 from me: -)
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