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Breath of Love

I had some pickled onions, With stilton cheese and garlic bread: This breath of love is just for you! (Although you gag and turn your head…) for Gayle's contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/21/2015 6:23:00 PM

Had me chuckling as I ate some garlic last night and hubby didn't so I think I must have stunk all night. A cute poem. love phyl

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/19/2015 10:44:00 AM

Hehehe you had me all smiles with this one Jack ;) really good to read you tonight

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/25/2015 10:02:00 AM

Loving the love. What a fire cracker of a crack-up. Nice words.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/24/2015 9:50:00 AM

Ha,ha brilliant Jack, a recipe for rejection. love this

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2015 7:32:00 AM

Jack, onions and garlic together in one kiss, yuk, best of luck and thanks so much for your forever support of my poetry ~~

Angie Thomas

Date: 2/16/2015 6:25:00 AM

Ewww.... The smell of garlic!!! But a very smart and unique write that I Thoroughly enjoyed!! A sure 7 from me :) and best of luck for the contest

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/10/2015 2:56:00 PM

I hope you are not serious Jack..' come to think on it I wondered why that statue has its head turned on my lawn..' I do declare I think you getting me paranoid..!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/5/2015 4:46:00 PM

a delightful piece smiling very beautifully penned jack

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/4/2015 9:14:00 PM

A humorous entry for the contest. Funny skits have been made from akward situations like this. Think I would pop out a breath mint for myself and offer one to the offender too. Haha. Garlic can save lives, but I usually use the orderless kind in pill form. G l in the contest Jack!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/4/2015 2:43:00 PM

The humor might win the contest but not the affection of the ladies..Ha!! Ha!!!Thanksfor all the comments..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2015 7:29:00 AM

Jack, this is delightfully fun, I avoid garlic at all costs for this very reason, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/3/2015 8:57:00 PM

Lol... enjoyed your take on the topic... regards,nad!

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/3/2015 7:21:00 PM

Well can you blame me? If I didn't, I'd probably be dead. :)

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 2/3/2015 5:58:00 PM

Funny take on the topic. Check out my entry.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/3/2015 5:44:00 PM

lol great humour Jack gl in contest hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 2/3/2015 3:27:00 PM

This is a very worthy entry for the contest, Jack! Good to see you posting again. I adore any kind of smelly cheese ... and garlic! but my wife does not quite like my tastes:) // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2015 3:19:00 PM

ha ha ha - mmmm I have to admit I ADORE Stilton cheese and garlic bread but not together ... not too fussed on the pickled onions - prefer beetroot lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx a 7 from me: -)