Breath of Life

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------   this is meant with a degree of humor   -----
------  but I know, joy is in the ears that hear  -----       
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To quote as truth a source for which
You otherwise show great disdain
Is humorous at best, a stitch
That some might say was not quite sane.

And if you cherish this sweet book,
But have not read it much of late,
It’s time you took another look,
And gave some other verses weight.

If Genesis is normative
For when it is all life begins
Then we should take a closer look
At other verses close therein.

For “breath of life” can only be
Applied to one by “Adam” called;
That you’d apply this verse to Eve?
Oh, exegete! Do be appalled!

In fifteen verses, very clear,
We see God do a nice ad lib,
Puts Adam in a heavy sleep
And liberates Eve from his rib!

Now something here just can’t be right;
No, something here just doesn’t jive.
God’s “breath of life” did not her grace;
The woman cannot be alive!

To call these verses normative
Is simply ludicrous, of course.
The “breath of life” God gave the dust?
Not air, but animating force.

And in this telling of our firsts
neither of them come from a womb,
So literal or figurative,
we need to give these verses room.

A babe will breath when it is born
On schedule or ahead of time.
You know that’s not the entry point:
As silly as a talking mime.

Way back in John, when Christ appears
upon arising, after death,
Gives the disciples Spirit then,
Conferring it with sacred breath.

Were they then dead before he breathed?
In some sense, yes, perhaps contrived
Christ’s Spirit thus has come to stay;
Spiritually, they are alive.

You don’t belive that labor does
Somehow propel those clumps of cells
By magic through the birth canal
And then form babes when they’re expelled?

Of course not, or there’d be a glitch
In logic with regard to sections.
But nobody believes all that;
it's just a case of misdirection.

We read a babe lept in the womb;
In Psalms, He forms our inward parts.
Christ, too, alive, ere left the tomb,
And now, he’s giving life to hearts.

Let’s study then, the scriptures well;
Bereans be: look for yourself.
Review in depth when life begins,
Not leave His counsel on the shelf?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 5/9/2022 3:00:00 PM
First of all Jeff I agree with you but a sad fact that is equally true most People do what People want to.They just do. Thanks for sharing this with us.Not everyone turns a deaf ear.
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Date: 5/9/2022 4:16:00 PM
It's all good! Thanks for commenting, Vickey!
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