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Breath of God

Breath of God God’s life force moves through us, cognised as breath flowing, enabling mind-body. Why for then do we dwell in egoic thoughts shoddy? God’s life force moves through us, yet we feel incomplete, feeling not bliss rapture, deafened by thought flow din, that lowers soul stature. God’s life force moves through us, that we feel pulse dual, dancing thus in tandem and when all becomes one, we enter His kingdom. God’s life force moves through us, else what are we but dust? If we give love some room, bliss currents fill our form ~ we feel heart lotus bloom. 06-June-2022
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June 7, 2022 at 4:50 AM
"God’s life force moves through us, else what are we but dust? If we give love some room, bliss currents fill our form "~ So true dear friend .... ! God's life force gives meaning and direction to our life. Without it we remain just a lump of flesh ! As ever, a great poem on the divine spark in us.
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June 7, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, Valsa
Buhagiar Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 2:19 AM
This is very true. We can never understand God till the day we are joined to Him.
Seeker Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 5:49 AM
Each time we outpour love, we are joined with God
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