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BREATH OF EAGLES

BREATH OF EAGLES climb where eagles soar open slats breathe on my shoes crude wooden railing 7/10/2017 haiku

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Date: 7/11/2017 4:42:00 PM
Acrophobic anyone? Sounds like a beautiful climb and a beautiful haiku!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Date: 7/11/2017 6:37:00 AM
I just love how you see things. Beautifully designed Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Date: 7/11/2017 3:04:00 AM
...uplifting dear, Kim! Much enjoyed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thanks, Demetrios!
Date: 7/11/2017 3:03:00 AM
...uplifting dear, Kim! Much enjoyed.
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:26:00 AM
kim this is real nice, i like where you put the turn
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:25:00 AM
What an evocative haiku! That's wonderful imagery there, I have fear of heights, and could feel this :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Darren!
Date: 7/11/2017 1:16:00 AM
Nothing crude about this! A lovely haiku, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, WW!