Breath of Eagles

BREATH OF EAGLES

climb where eagles soar
open slats breathe on my shoes
crude wooden railing

7/10/2017
haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wood Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Acrophobic anyone? Sounds like a beautiful climb and a beautiful haiku!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Green Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 6:37 AM
I just love how you see things. Beautifully designed Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 3:04 AM
...uplifting dear, Kim! Much enjoyed.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thanks, Demetrios!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 3:03 AM
...uplifting dear, Kim! Much enjoyed.
La France Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 2:26 AM
kim this is real nice, i like where you put the turn
White Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 2:25 AM
What an evocative haiku! That's wonderful imagery there, I have fear of heights, and could feel this :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Darren!
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 1:16 AM
Nothing crude about this! A lovely haiku, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, WW!
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