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Breath of Dreams

Quietly streaming through the breath of dreams in clouds the whispers came in colors from scarlet to midnight with secrets known in our deepest places where sacred words disappear in measureless time Words that speak in amaranthine languages of persona and subliminal origins and ancestry inexhaustible and ever present For the leaves were talking in their green shimmer and shake and sway with words grounded to trees spreading in patterns on currents of chaos in zephyrs off rivers flow blowing Streaming through the breath of dreams in clouds "Breezing trees heard the whisper of leaves" April 17, 2020 Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup poet - Vijay Pandit Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One "Breezing trees heard the whisper of leaves" - Vijay Pandit, from the poem "The Last Goodbye" Resubmitted May 23, 2020 Your Best Free Verse 2020 Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 5/29/2020 2:40:00 PM
Lonna, it is such a pleasure to return once more to offer you my congratulations for your excellent win in John's contest.My soul is ever moved by the artistic and emotional beauty of your expression. I agree with Aditi, this poem has a silky, ethereal quality that still sweeps me up and away. More beautiful second time around. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/30/2020 11:36:00 AM
Oh Susan, I am so grateful you feel this way. Its every poets dream come true! Thank you dear friend.
Date: 5/26/2020 1:38:00 PM
Lonna this is amazing! Your words create such a soothing effect almost feathery feeling. I love the beautiful imagery you have used, indeed whispers in my heart. Congratulations on your win :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/26/2020 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Aditi. I so appreciate your visit and your kind words.
Date: 5/26/2020 6:51:00 AM
Congrats on your multiple wins, Lonna. Well deserved accolades on this beautiful write.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/26/2020 10:33:00 PM
Vijay, I cannot thank you enough for the inspiration!
Date: 5/25/2020 7:27:00 PM
Very well done Lonna, enjoyed this very much, congrats on another win!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/25/2020 8:43:00 PM
Thank you John!!
Date: 5/3/2020 6:31:00 AM
a very deep take on the contest... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/3/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. It seems my muse has decided to visit a deeper mode of expression. I thank you for leading it there. Love Vijay Pandit, and also how you set up the appreciation of others in this wonderful group. Its a great was to connect us.
Date: 4/24/2020 10:23:00 AM
The sublime quality of your free verse sweeps me up and away to realms of artistic expression that I never want to come down from. Deep and beautiful, Lonna. Vijay's inspiration moved your muse to creative splendor. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you always.. ~Susan
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/25/2020 10:45:00 PM
Thank you for all those adjectives, and especially for the kindness of taking the time to direct them to me. Best and warmest wishes right back to you Susan.
Date: 4/23/2020 6:47:00 AM
This piece of the poem alone is amazing: "Words that speak in amaranthine languages of persona and subliminal origins and ancestry inexhaustible and ever present" The rest is wonderful also but this popped out at me. Now I have to run for a dictionary to find out what amaranthine means.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/25/2020 10:44:00 PM
I love using that word "amaranthine". Thank you Caren, you are so kind.

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