Breath of Dawn

As night turns to day,
Deep breaths of cool nightly air:
Exhale a new dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Neal Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Awesome, a new begining of the day. Great work. Love Elizabeth
Chircop Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 2:55 PM
love the deep breath of night as it exhales a new dawn,every new dawn is a blessing---beatiful------------charma
Bird Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Excellent! A new day dawning from the nourishement that the night supplies. Lovely!
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 12:31 PM
This awesome haiku gives life to the earth's environment. Outstanding work, Raul! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 4:04 PM
You stay up nights thinking of these wonderful Haikus? Lovely. Bg
Chircop Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 3:26 PM
i love this fresh breath of Dawn through your poetry----charma
Fraser Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 2:21 PM
Beautiful Haiku Raul, nice picture showing here>>James
Buys Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Such a beautiful image and novel way to look at it. Very well done. Regards Heidie
Higgins Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 10:01 AM
Another winner in my book...I love how you make the three lines in your haiku paint the picture..very talented...good work.
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