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Breath of Dawn

As night turns to day, Deep breaths of cool nightly air: Exhale a new dawn.

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Elizabeth Neal

Date: 6/27/2009 10:31:00 AM

Awesome, a new begining of the day. Great work. Love Elizabeth

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/21/2009 2:55:00 PM

love the deep breath of night as it exhales a new dawn,every new dawn is a blessing---beatiful------------charma

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/18/2009 9:58:00 AM

Excellent! A new day dawning from the nourishement that the night supplies. Lovely!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2009 12:31:00 PM

This awesome haiku gives life to the earth's environment. Outstanding work, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/16/2009 4:04:00 PM

You stay up nights thinking of these wonderful Haikus? Lovely. Bg

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/16/2009 3:26:00 PM

i love this fresh breath of Dawn through your poetry----charma

James Fraser

Date: 6/16/2009 2:21:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Raul, nice picture showing here>>James

Heidie Buys

Date: 6/16/2009 11:00:00 AM

Such a beautiful image and novel way to look at it. Very well done. Regards Heidie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/16/2009 10:01:00 AM

Another winner in my book...I love how you make the three lines in your haiku paint the picture..very talented...good work.