Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

Breath Of Autumn

Glows this fall with its joy's delight 
Tints burst, gold and rossette, on sight 
Blossoms on fields begin to peep
Along lush soil where mornings creep.

November breathes through minty breeze
A season's vow to dance wiith ease 
Upon clayed floor bedecked at last ;
In drapes of birdsongs...quite unmatched :

Oval -shaped leaves unfurling now 
Would soon hang heavy on the bough, 
Quite charming they are, stirring there
Enough to thrill.. I must delare .

And  harvest full on baskets lain
Folks hum of Thanksgiving's refrain 
Beholden by God's jubilee ;
The wisp of autumn breathes in me !

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Tom Cunningham September 4, 2026 at 8:28 PM My favourite season Nette after the stifling summer we had in the uk the autumn 🍂🍁🍂🍁 couldn't come quick enough. Tom🌹

Joanna Daniel August 27, 2026 at 10:03 PM Lovely, Nette, sure to place high😊

Valsa George August 26, 2026 at 7:04 PM A beautiful poem on autumn's multifaceted charms- leaves bursting into tints varied, fruits and corns being ready for harvest, people getting ready for Thanks giving. All the best dear Nette.

Paige Hind August 25, 2026 at 10:28 PM so lovely!

Gershon Wolf August 25, 2026 at 8:24 PM Such a charming write, Nette. That last stanza strikes me just right - and spectacularly so. Thanks, Gershon

Moon Harp August 25, 2026 at 5:13 AM Nette, This is a lovely tribute to autumn, and the rhyme scheme is exquisite. Well done. Moon Harp

Sara Kendrick August 25, 2026 at 4:31 AM I enjoyed reading this work about autumn, Nette. It has good rhyme, descriptions and feels of autumn. Thank you for sharing it with us, and if for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.

Hiya Sharma August 25, 2026 at 4:30 AM Awwwwn the Thanksgiving! Loveeee th myriad autumnal hues and fall nuances that you've spread here all across on the poetic canvas, dear Neide 🍂🍂💫💫 Absolutely LOVE the rich use of colours and imagery, such cosy vibe in your words and the atmosphere that you've created, so warm ~ "Tints burst, gold and rossette, on sight Blossoms on fields begin to peep Along lush soil where mornings creep" How magical!! 🧚‍♀️🧚‍♀️🍁🍁 Spellbinding as always my dear! Sending you rosy starlight and moonbeams

Sotto Poet August 25, 2026 at 3:11 AM Nette, your great poem beautifully captures the essence of autumn. The vivid imagery of the season's colors and the mention of Thanksgiving evoke a warm, nostalgic feeling. The rhythm flows nicely, and the use of descriptive language makes it enjoyable to read.

Alison A Smith August 25, 2026 at 12:48 AM A warm, uplifting celebration of autumn, with vivid colour, birdsong, ripening leaves, harvest, and gratitude all carried in graceful rhyming couplets. The poem has a gentle, devotional spirit, and its closing line beautifully makes the season feel personal and alive.🍁🎑🍂🥮

Dorothy Gibbons August 24, 2026 at 11:01 PM Spectacular write ✍️ Nanette on my fav season Autumn 🧡 Love everything about it and you describe it perfectly 👌 Was gonna highlight special lines but I canny ( scottish expression for can't) but I love every word so 100% ❤️ fav for me today hugzzz friend 🌹hugzzz friend

Howard Kerr August 24, 2026 at 10:19 PM Magnificent to the core, majestic imagery, haunting lines evocative. It gleams and glows, Nette.🔥🔥🔥🔥 Best of luck to you. Heartfelt thanks for your constructive comments on My Worst Enemy. I always value your visits. Howard