Breath As We Breathe ....

Holding onto your breath as you breathe
I find myself capitivated by your smile
I feel your kiss that touches my soul
I find myself loving you with timeless love
A warmth of you shadows my aura
The deepness inside your words I hear you whisper
Its only now I am alive as I shiver with you in my life
I close my eyes and see you near to me I am all for you
Even when we are apart I am loving you 
A tenderness that grows like the sweetest garden 
Its shown between us like a scarlet of scented rose
Its beauty that runs deep from the inside to the outside
Its a moment of sheer induging love a side we have hidden so long
Now we find what we have missed so many tears and fears used to drowned
A sense of strength that holds on to me a man I adore a woman that is yours
I give myself to you a passion that runs away with all passionate moments
Holding onto your breath as you breathe 
It is you I need the gods above planted the seed 
And now two bodies feed on the love that has bloomed
For you and me the sunset reaches all depths
As we hold onto breath as we breathe ....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/4/2010 2:50:00 PM
and i'm sure,many of your readers will sigh,with a runaway imagination :)....peace , jay
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Date: 9/4/2010 12:03:00 PM
you are so good at expressing yourself. it is your signature. enjoyed once again my dear. keep it up.
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:38:00 AM
Lovely words, glad you are together
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Date: 9/3/2010 10:21:00 PM
Love the passion Sarah, a great poem
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Date: 9/3/2010 8:55:00 PM
Nice, Sarah! Lots of beauty found in the words of your poem. Life has its in and out's. The words you give in this poem hold, passion for all to read and feel while reading your poetry. Enjoyed ,.p.d.
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Date: 9/3/2010 6:46:00 PM
Nice interesting thoughts on love and its yearnings and passions, sarah
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Date: 9/3/2010 4:46:00 PM
Very romantic and passionate write that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading your work..Glad that I chose this one to read tonight..Sara
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Date: 9/3/2010 3:02:00 PM
Another deep write with so much warmth and feelings.... luv Michael
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