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Still going after my 9th year of surviving...

Breast Cancer Assault-Pinktober 2

Silently you crept onto my weakened chest;
Grew huge until pain flooded my core,
Then put inner will to an arduous test.   

You were found when I undressed;
Gently rubbed where I was sore,
Silently you crept onto my weakened chest. 

Slowly you took away all my zest,
But I wanted to even the score;
Then put inner will to an arduous test.

I did what I thought to be the best;
So I fought your callous bloody war,
Silently you crept onto my weakened chest.

Thought this must be my life’s quest;
Thus I fought like I have never fought before,
Then put inner will to an arduous test.

I consider myself extremely blessed;
Fighting like a lion’s fierce roar.
Silently you crept onto my weakened chest;
Then put inner will to an arduous test. 

Copyright © 2015 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Eighth Place Winner ~ "PINKTOBER #2 (old/new poems)” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer’s
Oct. 1, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 10/24/2015 11:04:00 AM
A subject very close to my heart Caryl - my maternal grandmother died of breast cancer when my mum was 8 :-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2015 12:55:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Caryl!
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Date: 10/12/2015 12:00:00 PM
amazing... congrats
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Date: 10/11/2015 8:21:00 PM
I like that repeating line about putting the inner will to an arduous test. it hits home with reinforcing that idea. Congrats in this contest and good night. I am finally going off for the day!!
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Date: 10/8/2015 11:57:00 PM
Carly, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest PINKTOBER blog titles "YOU SAY," if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:23:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poem.
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