Breakup

BREAK-UP So it’s over I feel nothing All along I thought it was, Something special, But nothing? So what was I afraid of? The dark has come and gone And I wasn’t even tough, Just slept and woke up at noon And you were gone! I felt healthy, completely cured! Of the malady, vagary, misery, vanity! Yes, all gone! Thank God!!

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Skat A

Date: 1/20/2013 5:22:00 PM

Nice featured poem~SKAT

Jack Jordan

Date: 1/20/2013 4:38:00 PM

The universal experience... Fine work. Jack

E.J. Smith

Date: 1/20/2013 3:03:00 PM

That's the way to do it! Yeah Girl!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2013 9:11:00 AM

Bright, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/12/2013 7:29:00 AM

Whoa! That sure sounds like a great feeling - it is fear and doubt that makes us hold on to some things but once that goes peace enters into our every being. Very well penned Githui!