Breaking Point

As if till now numbed-my mind, 
Suddenly i woke from the dream, 
Once again to remorse find

How I got here, I do not know
 But here somehow, at the breaking point.
Avoiding the quicksands that pull me lower,
I try to find a vantage point.

 And just as I strain to look behind,
I see the places where i shattered.
So sorrow brings me on my knees, Eventhough mourning now didn't matter

Then I realised-
 It takes real courage 
Not to face fears, but to have a will to subdue them.
Courage to recieve strength in weak knees,
To leave my recluse of illusion. 
And for redemption that frees
 from these chains of deception.

What brings you to your breaking point?! Do your enemies?
 No!
 Where does hope really disappoint?
 At your miseries? No!

For these I could face,
When there's peace within. But if there's turbulance inside, My spirit starts crumbling in.

So when I settle the struggle within, 
Even the faintest hope will do. 
Then I'll make it to the breaking point, 
Even through and through.
         -ek
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Agustin Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Goyal Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 9:51 AM
I loved reading this, it has a very motivational tone to it which I really enjoyed reading, -AG
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