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Breaking My Heart In Pieces

BREAKING MY HEART IN PIECES Surreal, unconceivable, unbelievable!!! Twenty family members so sick with Covid, two critical. Draining, mentally exhausting, breaking my heart in pieces. 1/15/21 Line Gauthier 20-Words max - do it with feeling contest

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/11/2021 9:43:00 AM

Perfect emotional write Marilene. Linda

Marilene Evans
Date: 2/11/2021 12:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Linda... the next day I penned this poem, my niece died and then the next day, my brother died. They were the two in critical condition. Then my mother died with different cause four days later. My heart was torn.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/19/2021 1:55:00 AM

Yeah, we've all lost so many the past year; anyone who gets through it is reason to celebrate, only we can't celebrate together. Makes it difficult.

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/19/2021 8:02:00 PM

This is such a difficult time for our family. We just lost my brother two days ago and my !6 year old niece, three days ago, the two who were critical. We could not even see them. 18 recovered; but we got together to celebrate and pray for the two we lost. Thank you.