Rose Tucker Poet Sonnet

Breaking Free

My feet are walking round on creaky floors
And the cool autumn mist surrounds them
My mind is closed to open doors
And the life that surrounds him

Dark side is where his mind is from
I hear yelling and screaming
Don't look back and run just come
The moonlight shines on this evening 

Something seems to stir inside
I break free from the curse I see
Left alone inside to hide
He wont let go of me

Something seems to stir inside
A new feeling that I cannot hide

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Skat A June 16, 2015 at 12:30 AM ROSE, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2015 at 2:23 PM - Hello new member: Rose - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A May 28, 2015 at 12:21 PM Rose, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2015 at 11:51 AM Rose, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Casarah Nance May 27, 2015 at 8:16 PM Ohh intriguing story, you have me hooked...nicely done

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 7:58 PM That's deep Rose, let it go