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Breaking Free

My feet are walking round on creaky floors And the cool autumn mist surrounds them My mind is closed to open doors And the life that surrounds him Dark side is where his mind is from I hear yelling and screaming Don't look back and run just come The moonlight shines on this evening Something seems to stir inside I break free from the curse I see Left alone inside to hide He wont let go of me Something seems to stir inside A new feeling that I cannot hide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/16/2015 12:30:00 AM
ROSE, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 5/28/2015 2:23:00 PM
- Hello new member: Rose - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2015 12:21:00 PM
Rose, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/28/2015 11:51:00 AM
Rose, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/27/2015 8:16:00 PM
Ohh intriguing story, you have me hooked...nicely done
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Date: 5/27/2015 7:58:00 PM
That's deep Rose, let it go
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