Breaking Free

I feel trapped in a shell and want to get out
It get so frustrating I want to shout
Trying to figure out what put me here in the first place
Before I leave this cramped little space

Not wanting to return to what put me here
Trying to avoid my constant fear 
Of people hurting me... 
Keeping me from who I want to be
I need to realize that I deserve the best
And no longer settle for anything less

I want to escape without looking back
I want to remain on a new solid track
Happy, without fear and totally free
The part of me I miss to be

How do I get rid of this shell?
Once upon a time I knew oh so well
But now I can’t seem to figure it out
Why, where, what is this all about?

Set me free for I am stuck
Praying hard for better luck
I need to escape, this overworked mind
I need to break out and need to unwind

For now all I can do is pray
That life works out in an amazing way
For now all there is to say
Is in this cramped shell,  I can no longer stay

Time to focus on me
Be all I ever wished to be
While I’m finally breaking free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/20/2015 12:15:00 AM
deep excellent pen dear friend touching piece i can relate bless you
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Date: 1/20/2015 12:51:00 AM
Thank you Liam for always taking the time out to read my work and for the lovely comments. Have a blessed day my friend. Hugs "B"
Date: 1/12/2015 9:23:00 AM
Very nice pen! Truly Enjoyed your piece dear friend ! A 7 from me! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxx D.
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:58:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend Dorian. Keep well and have a lovely day. Big Hugs "B"
Date: 1/12/2015 8:35:00 AM
Your poem has captured the spirit of “live for today" with words that awaken the adventurer that dwells in the hearts of most people, which through neglect has been allowed to remain dormant far too long. Emile.
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and understanding comment Emile. Warm Regards "B"
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