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breaking free from the cocoon unfurling her wings AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on June 27, 2022

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Date: 6/30/2022 1:00:00 PM
Though the beautiful picture lets us know this is literal, it can carry such a stirring metaphorical meaning as well. This is a beautiful haiku Line.
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Date: 6/30/2022 2:37:00 PM
yes absolutely ~ especially with the use of 'her' in the final line ~

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