Breaking Brittle

The only thing we hate more than one another is ourselves,
We are caught up in an idea,
So reluctant too reality,
Ingnorent to ourselves while treating each other well,
That's when it's worse,
Pretending we are in love,
We are both sick,
A little love sick.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 7:13 PM
I love that last part: a little sick a little love sick. AWesome ending!
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