Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

Breakfast At Denny's

Two fried eggs I’ll have with cheddar cheese,
hash browns and some bacon on the side!
Would you make the bacon crispy please?
Two fried eggs I’ll have with cheddar cheese.
That lovely pastry also- such a tease -
looks like the Danish which last time I tried!
Two fried eggs I’ll have with cheddar cheese,
hash browns and some bacon on the side.

May 22, 2021
For Kim Merryman's Try A Triolet Poetry Contest

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Anna Marie Kaianah June 29, 2021 at 2:38 PM Mmmm reading this make me want to go to Denny's! :D Congrats on your win! ~Anna

Janice Canerdy May 26, 2021 at 6:21 AM I wasn't hungry till I read this poem, Andrea. If it were acceptable to worship food, I would bow to bacon! A big CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 8:20 PM Andrea, I'm beginning to think you are obsessed with food! LOL Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2021 at 1:49 PM How did you guess? Haha

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2021 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on your podium win Andrea. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2021 at 10:25 AM Now I'm headed to the frig! This reminds me of Sunday brunch - my favorite meal of the weekend. Congratulations on your win. Meet you at Denney's!

Aniruddha Pathak May 25, 2021 at 6:52 AM A good breakfast to start the day with, and it seems in your hand to write a poem is almost a play, congrats

Panagiota Romios May 25, 2021 at 6:03 AM A great fun poem, Andrea..., Kudos on a win)) Pangie xx

Christuraj Alex May 24, 2021 at 10:43 PM Grand Breakfast. Congratulations!

Alexis Y. May 24, 2021 at 10:40 PM Hi Andrea, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Carolyn Devonshire May 24, 2021 at 10:32 AM A very cute poem, Andrea. I'm surprised Denny's can afford to serve bacon; it's tripled in price here since pre-pandemic. Best wishes for a win in Kim's fun contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong May 23, 2021 at 4:38 PM This is simply delightful Andrea. It sounds so yummy too. I think this will be a hit with Kim. Makes me want to go out for breakfast which we haven’t done in over a year. Hugs, Connie

Anitha Jayasankar May 23, 2021 at 5:45 AM Tasty and yummy... I very much wish to write for this contest... not getting time Andrea... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Joanna Daniel May 23, 2021 at 5:00 AM They sound tantalizingly tasty, Andrea:) you do food poetry well, but then, you do all kinds of poetry so well:)

Supraja Kannan May 23, 2021 at 3:07 AM That's a wonderful read, Andrea... You beautifully write about foods which make people crave... Lovely poetry...

Victor Buhagiar May 22, 2021 at 11:34 PM Nice way of having breakfast. No Tiffany for you though. :) Hugs.

Quoth Theraven May 22, 2021 at 9:17 PM Andrea, Breakfast at Denny's with Moons Over My Hammy much better than Tiffany's and Audrey's Moon River. Waiter.., bring me another fork. -Richard

Mike Bayles May 22, 2021 at 3:22 PM Enticing poem, Andrea. I like the line, "That lovely pastry also- such a tease.

Kim Rodrigues May 22, 2021 at 3:16 PM Title made me smile! I worked for Denny’s for a year when I was 18. A yummy triolet!

Line Gauthier May 22, 2021 at 2:10 PM Sounds like triple the calories to me ~ lol Good job, Angela. Music to most people's ears ~

David Mchattie May 22, 2021 at 1:46 PM Bacon. Bacon. Bacon. Nothing better. I'm getting hungry. Have a great day.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 22, 2021 at 12:34 PM Hello Andrea, I remember when my husband |was alive| went to Denny's when travelling through the United States .Breakfast for me was potato pancakes and coffee. Best breakfast i ever had. Hugs Darlene

Vijay Pandit May 22, 2021 at 12:28 PM Enough calories for the entire day--but who is counting when we are having fun. Delicious write, Andrea.

L Milton Hankins May 22, 2021 at 11:37 AM Wonderful triolet, Andrea. It made me sooo hungry. I've eaten a delicious breakfast at Denny's (in St. Louis) many times. Best wishes in the contest!

Tom Cunningham May 22, 2021 at 11:27 AM Sounds yummy. Andrea now i feel hungry. Tom

Sotto Poet May 22, 2021 at 11:14 AM I learned something new thanks to you, Andrea. You helped me to write a triolet poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

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