Breakfast

High in the azure sky- swallows flying high

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James Foulk

Date: 8/8/2008 11:46:00 AM

sounds beautiful, like the use of azure sky. a very peaceful poem. thank you for reading my poem Sunday Diner at Grandma's and for your kind comment.

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/8/2008 6:20:00 AM

So very beautiful and clever with title. Congrats Brian on your placing in Kristin's contest! Sure hope they get that contest page fixed soon. I am enjoying the book very much, thank you again. I am starting to dream about haiku. That is a good thing. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/8/2008 5:38:00 AM

Brian - great job - Your comments are always so welcome - I wish to thank you for your support - God Bless

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/8/2008 4:58:00 AM

Pretty little birds - I like the play on words here (swallow and breakfast) well done, pretty picture here. Blessings to you, Kristin