Triny Xiang Poet Rhyme

Break on through

Take a battering ram to the other side
The recoil will do me harm
A knife and spoon will suffice
Break the gates violently with arms
It will seal itself again and entice
It will swallow my body with charms
It will spit me out again with vices
Put down that aching piece of log
Give these hands other than a mace
They are meant for more than war
Give it a last heave-ho just to tease
Grab any pen knife, make a scar
Whittle that mad log to a canoe
Each shaving an ordinary day
Look not upon the door with lust
Hop in the dugout after years of fray
The current takes me to the other side
Break through the door every May
But I hold onto that old log that died
The door on the river never sways
My citadel’s veil unbreached cries
It’s hard to face the day without a ram
Shave off my horns to be a lamb
My shepherd beckons on His raft
Lift me up from muddy waters damp
Onto my battering ram lashed 
Break on through the other side
Day to day may I be washed
Hour to hour may hopes be dashed
The gate is straight ahead
Let go of the ram for good
Kindly cut the door with scissors
Only sheared lambs enter

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Hilda Greenhough April 16, 2024 at 6:51 PM This is a unique poem. I like the transcending motive of the armaments becoming a canoe. It is a deep poem of peace. Thank you for writing. Triny Xiang April 16, 2024 at 11:03 PM Thank you. Every wooden canoe starts one shave at a time. Every camel needs to be shaved to go through the eye of the needle. The rich man must slim down to achieve peace. Glad you liked it.