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Break of Dawn

It was so dark and cold I felt alone in the dark of night It seemed as if the pitch black Would never go away That the sun would never come That no one would be the light To outshine the darkness But then you came Your beams of light shown And away the dark was blown You filled the sky with light And caused the roosters To crow with joy You filled my heart with happiness And my eyes were filled With tears of joy You were the rising sun The darkness and pain was gone And only the joy will remain You were my break of dawn ~2/12/2018

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Date: 3/14/2018 5:55:00 AM
You've had a win in a contest that's great! Which one I can only contemplate? But I'm here to you congratulate. On your number one in Best New Poems to date... Mick
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:54:00 PM
Great poem, wonderful. Congrats on taking the podium;-)
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Date: 3/10/2018 9:01:00 AM
It s a really beautiful written poem,I really enjoyed reading it, congrats on your win and also congrats to you as your poem is number 1 in best new poems, it s indeed a beauty
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Date: 3/4/2018 8:05:00 PM
Returning with another round of congratulations Hannah for your lovely win with your splendid poem. ~Susan
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:46:00 PM
Back with more congrats. Well done, Hannah.
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Date: 2/27/2018 9:57:00 AM
Really nice write Hannah, congrats on your placing in my contest!
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:44:00 PM
Hannah,your poem is a creative take on the contest theme and it is so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:26:00 PM
Interesting take on the contest Hannah.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Jane Doe
Date: 2/18/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!!!!
Date: 2/18/2018 11:53:00 AM
- A piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations, Hannah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jane Doe
Date: 2/18/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thx:)
Date: 2/14/2018 11:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Hannah.
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Jane Doe
Date: 2/15/2018 1:28:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/14/2018 9:15:00 PM
LOVELY poem, Hannah. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Jane Doe
Date: 2/15/2018 1:28:00 AM
Thank you so much!!!

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