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Break of Dawn

It was so dark and cold
I felt alone in the dark of night
It seemed as if the pitch black 
Would never go away
That the sun would never come
That no one would be the light
To outshine the darkness

But then you came
Your beams of light shown 
And away the dark was blown
You filled the sky with light
And caused the roosters
To crow with joy
You filled my heart with happiness
And my eyes were filled
With tears of joy
You were the rising sun
The darkness and pain was gone
And only the joy will remain
You were my break of dawn

~2/12/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/14/2018 5:55:00 AM
You've had a win in a contest that's great! Which one I can only contemplate? But I'm here to you congratulate. On your number one in Best New Poems to date... Mick
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:54:00 PM
Great poem, wonderful. Congrats on taking the podium;-)
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Date: 3/10/2018 9:01:00 AM
It s a really beautiful written poem,I really enjoyed reading it, congrats on your win and also congrats to you as your poem is number 1 in best new poems, it s indeed a beauty
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Date: 3/4/2018 8:05:00 PM
Returning with another round of congratulations Hannah for your lovely win with your splendid poem. ~Susan
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:46:00 PM
Back with more congrats. Well done, Hannah.
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Date: 2/27/2018 9:57:00 AM
Really nice write Hannah, congrats on your placing in my contest!
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:44:00 PM
Hannah,your poem is a creative take on the contest theme and it is so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:26:00 PM
Interesting take on the contest Hannah.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Hannah Rothen
Date: 2/18/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!!!!
Date: 2/18/2018 11:53:00 AM
- A piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations, Hannah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Hannah Rothen
Date: 2/18/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thx:)
Date: 2/14/2018 11:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Hannah.
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Hannah Rothen
Date: 2/15/2018 1:28:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/14/2018 9:15:00 PM
LOVELY poem, Hannah. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Hannah Rothen
Date: 2/15/2018 1:28:00 AM
Thank you so much!!!