Break My Dinghy

I walk a fine line with this limerick thingy So easy to fall off and break my dinghy Intentions are good I'd be good if I could Gonna try real hard if another chance you gimmie
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Walker Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Jack, hope you have some freeboard on your dinghy. Your limerick is a fun read. ~ Sonia
Ellison Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Thank you dear friend, Sonia! Come by again! Love and hugs, Jack xxx
Rosario Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Awesome. I am assured of a smile when I read your work.
Ellison Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Mission accomplished then!!! YEEHAW! Huggsies, Jack xxx
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