Break Free Opposing

Break Free (original).

I decline to be bathed in abject defeat, I intend to break free. 
My endeavour isn’t dead, intellect serves as a panacea for me 
My muse and I must find impassioned advocacy to meet. 
I intend to break free, I decline to be bathed in abject defeat. 
The solution I submit, it will be extraordinary and unconventional. 
A dramatic escape from all restrictions unintentional.

Break Free Opposing.

I adore to be bathed in glorious acclaim, I intend to indulge. 
I feel so securely alive, my brain can’t divulge.
My muse and I cannot agree and will only cause deceit. 
I intend to remain, I am going to accept hideous conceit. 
There’s no solution, it will be mundane and true to convention.
A sorrowful surrender to all chains and detention.

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I Am Anaya

Date: 1/9/2024 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations Wen! I first read this, and I then understood what the Dilly's contest detailed. Yours was truest to the task, I thought, a trophy from me! :D

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/10/2024 3:06:00 PM

Ahh thanks sweet Anaya. Of course I agree with you :) Your encouragement adds light to my day, but I am far too busy to have to go round dusting trophies all day !!! Luv Wen

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/8/2024 1:38:00 PM

Hi SV! Happy New Year. Your defiant resistance to a bath of defeat choosing "glorious acclaim" rings in the new year with positive energy and stirring resolve! Congratulations on your win! A great new year resolution. Sending you some bubble bath so you can soak and indulge! Blessings of health, happiness and joy for 2024!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/8/2024 2:26:00 PM

Aww Sam could you make it foaming shower Gel please, I really do have defiant resistance to bathing in anything (including abject defeat) Thanks for your great comment and great offer Sam. Wen sending every best wish to you.