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Break Free (original). I decline to be bathed in abject defeat, I intend to break free. My endeavour isn’t dead, intellect serves as a panacea for me My muse and I must find impassioned advocacy to meet. I intend to break free, I decline to be bathed in abject defeat. The solution I submit, it will be extraordinary and unconventional. A dramatic escape from all restrictions unintentional. Break Free Opposing. I adore to be bathed in glorious acclaim, I intend to indulge. I feel so securely alive, my brain can’t divulge. My muse and I cannot agree and will only cause deceit. I intend to remain, I am going to accept hideous conceit. There’s no solution, it will be mundane and true to convention. A sorrowful surrender to all chains and detention.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/9/2024 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations Wen! I first read this, and I then understood what the Dilly's contest detailed. Yours was truest to the task, I thought, a trophy from me! :D
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Date: 1/10/2024 3:06:00 PM
Ahh thanks sweet Anaya. Of course I agree with you :) Your encouragement adds light to my day, but I am far too busy to have to go round dusting trophies all day !!! Luv Wen
Date: 1/8/2024 1:38:00 PM
Hi SV! Happy New Year. Your defiant resistance to a bath of defeat choosing "glorious acclaim" rings in the new year with positive energy and stirring resolve! Congratulations on your win! A great new year resolution. Sending you some bubble bath so you can soak and indulge! Blessings of health, happiness and joy for 2024!
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:26:00 PM
Aww Sam could you make it foaming shower Gel please, I really do have defiant resistance to bathing in anything (including abject defeat) Thanks for your great comment and great offer Sam. Wen sending every best wish to you.
Date: 1/8/2024 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations! I loved the strong defiance in this one, well deserved placement :) (I'd quite pleased I had no clue who had written them and still picked yours :) )
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:22:00 PM
Thanks but D if you keep saying that - people will start to believe you ! Heheheheheheheh
Date: 12/22/2023 9:50:00 AM
Interesting flip dear friend. Nice rhyming too! :)
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Date: 12/22/2023 11:28:00 AM
Thanks Laf, Dilly sure poses some unique contests! Every best wish for 2024. I will miss you, Look after those sneaky slippery snakes. Wen

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