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Break Free

This is just a solid body but in within i have a heart to feel a mind to think, to learn and to act to be a whole new being Time has flown away without me noticing I never thought i have lost so many time yet, this bricks of walls surrounding me won't crumble I was raised in a selfish kind of love a chapter of life i won't dare to reopen I have a future my fears kept me away from moving I'm captivated I was wrong I need something to hold on to I need help

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/25/2010 12:05:00 PM
Love It!!! You make emotions sound like a poem and a poem sound like an epic play. Kudos!
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Date: 10/25/2010 11:33:00 AM
A very emotional poem and so beautifully written.To have not known real love is so sad.We tend to build up defences to protect us from hurt,hence the 'brick wall.' But we need to find trust to allow us to remove one brick at a time to allow love in.If this is from you Mony and not just by you releasing feelings through such wonderful poetry as this can help and so can friends to share your words with. Love June
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Date: 10/25/2010 11:27:00 AM
deep write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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