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"break Away From You"

The hardest thing to do...was break away from you..... I tell you, the hardest thing to do... was break away from you.... You hold anothers heart so true, I know there's not much else I can do... you showed me another way to be.. and that all's not lost for me..your thoughtfullness showed me light and that true love will come in time.. I can climb a mountain to the sky.. I can move the sun and make it night...but the hardest thing to do... was break away from you.... I tell you, the hardest thing to do...was break away form you ...........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/21/2011 5:41:00 PM
congrats my friend on this gem.. This is a wonderful poem to have featured cory
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful featured poem this week.~~
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:35:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your featured poem this week on PS.. my luv.. a wonderful write to share with us all with luv.. your Jersey Girl so luvs this piece ..but then... I luv them all ..forever..
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Date: 2/27/2010 1:09:00 PM
She did you a great favor in showing you how to believe that you can achieve in life and find love, Michael. Although the breakup hurts, I admire the way you acknowledge how much richer she made your life. Very nice poem! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 11:59:00 AM
When my fiancee and I broke, my temper awoke, mind a cloud of smoke, couldn't breath I began to choke... Punched the passenger side window, and payed the price for what I'd broke.... I feel your pain my friend.... Keep em comin'....:JP}
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