Michael J. Falotico Poet Ode

"break Away From You"

The hardest thing to do...was break away from you.....
I tell you, the hardest thing to do... was break away from you....
You hold anothers heart so true, I know there's not much
else I can do... you showed me another way to be..
and that all's not lost for me..your thoughtfullness showed
me light and that true love will come in time..
I can climb a mountain to the sky.. I can move the sun and
make it night...but the hardest thing to do... was break away 
from you.... I tell you, the hardest thing to do...was 
break away form you ...........

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Cory Long August 21, 2011 at 5:41 PM congrats my friend on this gem.. This is a wonderful poem to have featured cory

Constance La France August 19, 2011 at 10:07 AM Beautiful featured poem this week.~~

Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2011 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 11:35 PM Congrats Michael on your featured poem this week on PS.. my luv.. a wonderful write to share with us all with luv.. your Jersey Girl so luvs this piece ..but then... I luv them all ..forever..

Carolyn Devonshire February 27, 2010 at 1:09 PM She did you a great favor in showing you how to believe that you can achieve in life and find love, Michael. Although the breakup hurts, I admire the way you acknowledge how much richer she made your life. Very nice poem! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Jared Pickett February 27, 2010 at 11:59 AM When my fiancee and I broke, my temper awoke, mind a cloud of smoke, couldn't breath I began to choke... Punched the passenger side window, and payed the price for what I'd broke.... I feel your pain my friend.... Keep em comin'....:JP}