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Break a Wingtip - For Contest

harbingers of hope heavenly understudies waiting in the wings 4/3/2016 submitted to – Senryu on Angels – Poetry Contest sponsor – Marvin Celestial

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Probir Gupta

Date: 4/13/2016 11:14:00 AM

When philosophy blends in with poetry, that is something great... Congratulations...

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Probir for stopping by to read and comment

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/12/2016 5:49:00 PM

Congratulations John

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Nayda.

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/12/2016 5:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win, John :)

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Laura

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2016 4:42:00 PM

A delightful play on words, John! Congratulations on this worthy win. ~ Regards // paul

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Paul, I like to tease the angels a bit..

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/12/2016 12:19:00 PM

Well done John, congratulations...

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Charlie

Lu Loo

Date: 4/12/2016 8:27:00 AM

John, so much is said in such few words..Beautifully penned once again, you are very talented John...congrats on your placement...:)-luloo

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Laura, I appreciate the comment and your continued support of my work

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/12/2016 7:40:00 AM

Greetings John. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Teddy for checking in.,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 12:58:00 AM

John, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:18:00 PM

Thanks PD

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/5/2016 8:12:00 PM

So clever is the "understudies" ... earning their wings, I suppose !! :) And the title makes it perfect!!!

John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:18:00 PM

Hey Carrie, even angels gotta start somewhere...thanks fro stopping by to read and comment

Lu Loo

Date: 4/3/2016 12:15:00 PM

John, a beautiful senyru, good luck :)-luloo

John Lawless
Date: 4/5/2016 9:14:00 AM

Thanks Laura, appreciate your stopping by

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2016 10:51:00 AM

Oh so very clever John - I especially love the brilliant final line:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan

John Lawless
Date: 4/3/2016 12:00:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I kinda think that on some level we are all "angels in waiting".