Break
You’re not wrong about love
You almost broke my parents apart
My mom read your words and decided to leave some in return
Were sorrowful words erotic in nature
It ensued pain in her heart
If only your words laid serene on the page and in her ears
Las Chilenas, have opposed your lines Neruda
Dimension shifts in your favor when you decide to not abandon those you
love
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