Break-Up

I never thought we would break up
    I never thought it would end this way

One minute we are talking about forever
    Next the pain of you is making me dead

Why must you do this to me?
    I'm still the one you love you see

Never in a million years
    Would I thought you would be the one to cause my tears

Days go by with nothing to hear
    Weeks go by with no cheer

The pain slowly seeps down within
    She realizes she never needed you back then

The rage inside her turns to grief
    She blames herself and then starts to weep

Why was I so dumb before?
    I should of kicked him out the door

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Date: 7/26/2018 9:11:00 AM
I can relate with you 100% i have felt the same way before i hope you are feeling better thanks for sharing and good luck haley
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Mike Grant
Date: 10/28/2018 11:57:00 PM
You know what's Weird is I didn't write this comment I have seen a few of them I didn't write
Date: 7/10/2018 1:24:00 PM
You see that when someone fall in love, they never ever in a million years can think that the person who is swearing to love them, to spend their love life with you people will eventually leave you, so whatever happens was not your mistake, in fact such things tells us about the true nature of people and next time we are more careful, your poems are good, if you just become a little more social, like comment on other people poems, they'll comment on yours and you'll get alot of comments,
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Haley Dagley
Date: 7/10/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for the comment. I do truly want to comment on others, but sometimes I feel that my emotions do not allow me to. I have always been cautious of others because of the situations I been through. But I am defiantly working on it thanks!!!
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