B.R.E.A.K.(Bad Relationship Enters a Koma) Part 1

I gotta be honest I didn't think we'd go good together

From disliking each other to standing in sub-zero weather

Little did I know I was forever in the prescence of my future wifey

I messed up multiple times, I bet you wanted to fight

I cheated on you because of your past and that wasn't right

Sublimenal corrections are in order

You promised to have my daughter

Or yet my son

Thousands of hours passed since our love begun

Now karma has the audacity to step to my front door

I felt what you felt and I beg you boo no more

I'm not gonna pretend that I'm irreplacable

The love that we have for each other is impeccable

The house I built for you in my heart is unwreckable

You and I bouncing back from this BREAK is inevitable

The BREAK...

A Bad Relationship Enters A Koma

Encased in doubt we are, I can't smell the aroma

Of your lip gloss when we lock lips

Of your breath when I pull your panties below your hips

But back to the BREAK, I feel like it is my blunder

If you hear my heart cry for you, it'll sound like a roar of thunder

The only thing I am trying to prove is I can't let you move

That is...on without me

Don't ever doubt me

Face your fears

I'm here to wipe your tears

I've always been in your shadow

Getting you back will be like winning the lotto

I don't have a car or a job, to take you on dates

But I bet a bus and a SS check will get us our dates

This ain't materialistic

Let's be realistic

I'm the only man alive you should be with

If not then take your pick

Me or Him

Other girls? Forget them

Deprived of attention is how I left you

Ignoring what we had was in fact special

Scared I was of being did bogus

I cheated on you what a hocus pocus

Love her I did, in love WITH her I wasn't

Laying in my bed thinking about it was not pleasant

Then it came out and I felt like a baby with a bottle

Then you forgave me so I pushed it to full throttle

Things went smooth for a while...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/4/2009 2:45:00 PM
Interesting. Sara
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