Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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03.04.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Breadcrumbs -

                                        Another song to sing
                                      these tears I can't hide
                                           Concerns found,
                              an encounter with grief and despair
                                          Unknown decisions
                                          as a nebulous quest
                                  Certainty becomes uncertainty
                                    in an reciprocal vulnerability
                                           Things slowly die
                                    Pay attention ... we develops
                                    either physically or mentally
                                 Facing the wrong side of the wall
                             I must live on as I pursue my dreams
                                    Even traces of breadcrumbs
                                             may challenge

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Duke Beaufort May 27, 2024 at 5:15 PM Anne-Lise, I have been remiss in checking our your work and will try to catch up. Thanks for all your visits and comments. It's certainly true that when we feel bad, the littlest things can seem almost impossible. I hope you are well. Life can be an emotional yoyo!

Jennifer Proxenos April 6, 2024 at 5:44 AM Whatever challenge you might be facing my dear sweet friend i know the others will succumb to your wisdom and strength of character. You are an incredible person, and hope you never have to fight tears back again ever. Love and blessings Jennifer Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2024 at 2:27 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment Jenny, much appreciated :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar April 5, 2024 at 2:26 AM You have a strong character and will fight to the end. Hugs xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:49 AM - I'm strong, Victor ... but sometimes I'm tired of being strong - Everything's fine with me ... it's just thoughts that turned into a poem :) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia April 4, 2024 at 2:40 PM Ann this is something to be admired, I mean the way you express. This is another of yours that touches deeply my heart, especially on this moment of my life. Ann you really are an unique poet, you know how to knock everyone's soul. Well done my dear. I must clap my hands. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:46 AM - After reading your last poem I understand ... many thanks for your lovely comment, dear Maria :) - hugs

Ink Empress April 4, 2024 at 11:17 AM What a poignant and soul hitting writ this is dear anne lise i felt so many lines in this and i love the artwork that youv used here too, which fits your poem so very well. I love especially the lines “ an encounter with grief and despair Unknown decisions as a nebulous quest“ deeply moving! A pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:37 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs

Christina Bowring April 4, 2024 at 11:17 AM Wow dear beautiful Anne- Lise, this touches the heart with its powerful, heart rendering words. Alongside the words, the picture is profound as well. I truly felt this as will all that read it. Every line has great impact with so much deeply expressed thoughts and emotions. The last few lines are so poignant dear, sweet one. Live on - so many more dreams to chase. This really has touched me. Sending you many blessings and big hugs with love xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:44 AM -Christina, it's about acknowledging feelings and sad thoughts...hanging on and enjoying the little things in life...move on :) - Many thanks for your comment, much appreciated :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2024 at 9:19 AM What a powerful write/picture. Life is not always easy. Hope you are OK... This is a FAV for me. Have a blessed day writing away.................. Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:35 AM - Life is like a carousel, and you just have to hang on Paula :) - Thank you for your comment and your "fave" is worth its weight in gold :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham April 4, 2024 at 12:18 AM Quite an emotional write Anne-Lise, we should never give up on hope. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:31 AM - I have faith in hope, Tom ... a thread to hold on to :) - Many thanks for your comment, much appreciated :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh April 3, 2024 at 11:59 PM wonderful writing. I feel this. God bless you always, love, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:30 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Gina :) - hugs

Jay Narain April 3, 2024 at 3:08 PM Deep emotions. Hope you are doing welk. Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:25 AM - Everything is fine with me, Jay ... thank you very much :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues April 3, 2024 at 2:25 PM Hope your doing okay, sweet Anne-Lise! That second to last line! Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:24 AM - Everything is fine with me ... thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2024 at 12:15 PM Profound thoughts, Anne-Lise. Very nicely written Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:23 AM - Thank you, Andrea :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough April 3, 2024 at 11:32 AM I enjoyed this deep, questioning poem. Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:22 AM - Thank you, Hilda :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino April 3, 2024 at 8:30 AM Life can seem hard like diamonds, without a warmth of glitter -- petrifying~ a disappointed heart aged into stone -- but all such griefs will be broken with time, mended into rainbows. Faith. A beautiful, touching relatable poem. I can relate profoundly. Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2024 at 2:22 AM - So true, Joe :) - Many thanks for your comment, much appreciated :) - hugs