Bread Roll

Hungry Jimmy from Baker's Drift
Received a bread roll as a gift,
He sliced tomato and some cheese,
Added mayo just to please,
It went down so very swift.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 4/26/2015 8:54:00 AM
Yummm! I'm am drooling at the thought! I'm hesitant to go up against you in Jan's Limerick contest, my dear man!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 9:17:00 AM
Yes! I'm aware of your fellow Aussie and there are quite a few others here on ye ole Soupie, too!
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John Williams
Date: 4/26/2015 9:14:00 AM
I believe you have inside running young man,...........In fact I think you've nearly got it in the can.........But a word of warning, there is a dark horse, .....A man called Lindsay,a poetic force...................thanks for stopping by Jack
Date: 4/26/2015 7:27:00 AM
LOL John I do hope you enter my limerick contest - remember to put FOR CONTEST in the title:-) I am counting on you to make me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2015 7:38:00 AM
Yes one entry ... but you can change it if you feel you come up with an even better one - i won't be reading any until the contest has closed - that is why I asked for For Contest in the title as i love reading the humourous writes especially of you, John and Jack:-) Hugs jan xx
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John Williams
Date: 4/26/2015 7:36:00 AM
I will do Jan, I'm thinking about your contest now as I write. I nearly have one finished that may be to your liking. Is there only one entry per poet?.....kind regards----John
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