Bravery Long Lost

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Response to adults going stir crazy and complaining of being 'bored'.

guys~ get a grip don’t be wimps it’s not like you’re being asked to suit up for war stay indoors and let this pass stay out of the way of brave people doing their work AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on April 2, 2020

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 4/10/2020 7:41:00 PM

While there are those being granted freedom from work to avoid this invisible germ warfare, there are others suited up and fighting this war on your behalf within hospital wards, shame on the moaners and groaners, on-point words, Line . . .

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2020 10:13:00 PM

Absolutely, Indiana. It actually feels odd to have all our comforts.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/4/2020 9:54:00 PM

Interesting... It's not conventional war, but it has all the earmarks of terrorism--- bio-terrorism. I don't believe that it's from what the Chinese eat for a second. Details of my thoughts/proof are not for public consumption... Cheers and Good Cheer, Line! :) Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2020 10:14:00 PM

I believe you somehow, Gershon. LOL

Dm Babbit

Date: 4/3/2020 12:24:00 PM

Just use a little common sense.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2020 8:20:00 PM

Or at lot.

Julie Achilles

Date: 4/3/2020 5:43:00 AM

It has many aspects of war- but this enemy is invisible and dangerous- we are all united against this enemy and I pray we are victorious Stay safe and best regards.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2020 8:21:00 PM

If we all do our part...