Notes About The Poem

Response to adults going stir crazy and complaining of being 'bored'.

Bravery Long Lost

guys~
get a grip
don’t be wimps
it’s not like
you’re being asked
to suit up for war

stay indoors and let this pass
stay out of the way of
brave people doing their work



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Shaw Avatar
April 10, 2020 at 7:41 PM
While there are those being granted freedom from work to avoid this invisible germ warfare, there are others suited up and fighting this war on your behalf within hospital wards, shame on the moaners and groaners, on-point words, Line . . .
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Absolutely, Indiana. It actually feels odd to have all our comforts.
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 9:54 PM
Interesting... It's not conventional war, but it has all the earmarks of terrorism--- bio-terrorism. I don't believe that it's from what the Chinese eat for a second. Details of my thoughts/proof are not for public consumption... Cheers and Good Cheer, Line! :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2020 at 10:14 PM
I believe you somehow, Gershon. LOL
Babbit Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Just use a little common sense.
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 8:20 PM
Or at lot.
Achilles Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:43 AM
It has many aspects of war- but this enemy is invisible and dangerous- we are all united against this enemy and I pray we are victorious Stay safe and best regards.
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 8:21 PM
If we all do our part...
Adams Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 9:20 PM
not a war but an attack from an invisible enemy... stay safe... hugs
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 12:59 AM
Yes. Let's all stay safe and get through this.
Watt Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 6:03 PM
Thank you for stating this, Line. A powerful punch in a minimal space.
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 12:59 AM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Good point Line. All the best to you.
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 12:59 AM
Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.
Nicole Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 3:01 PM
There is no war! I understand this is different, but we will get through it. Just stay calm and listen. My best to you Line. Hugs, Brandy
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 3:11 PM
We're all in this together.
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