Brave Men of Ole'

Torn !

We encounter many obstacles/
I'm not crazy,
I'm just not you !
There is the High Queen/
Who often stands aloof !
To her unbelievable wishes.,

Who so often dines on a delicious cuisine,

Richly content on their new ideals,
Suddenly an opened door !
A given way of escape from the actual norm ?
Brave Men of Ole'

Rejoiced to tell !

A splendor in the grass;
Hence, to burn in Hell !
The castle had a big celebration/
A quite good story to tell !

With many decorations far too many to count ?

The number of various corpses that were their/
Far too many to count !
That solution was still enveloped inside/
That Court Jester had no place in which to hide !

Behind the hidden garb of false compromise/
Now does all of this come at a big surprise ?
Just ask all of those children lingering in the swamp/
Never again will I be so overly kind/
To one Court Jester that almost robbed me blind !

By it's shallow creek,

Their often lies a frog ?
Frozen in time from the rudimentary sentiments of it's past ?
A noble jeer of an abandoned but happy cheer !
That castle is in the outset of Friar Tuck's Square/

Lay barren amidst the golden jug,
A place of refreshment to dine !
Like some snake unleashed in the woods/
Made Mariam would often prance/
About with a lattice fashionable decor,
Stretched forth out upon the palace !
A Court Jester slammed his mallet !
This in effect woke up half of the palace !

An honest hobbit who had one leg pranced about with an abandoned frolic !

Throughout the hidden ambiance to silence the given moment/
Hence, it's gravitational pull may take many down/
A given time well spent in thought ?
In willing to unleash that great power among the Jesture !
Now the wheel is turned/
To ponder it's page being turned,
An inner impulse to change the way we are/
From the inside out !
Many are still said to be born under a bad sign ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/7/2012 2:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Mario. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2010 5:29:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Mario. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 3:34:00 PM
Very excellent read/ A work in process since the Fall of 1989/ Thanks for the fun ! Mario
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