Brave Grand Daughter

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With my plucky granddaughter, I'm ne'er bored. She saunters at connate emblems and depth. And the way the fay sway with her. Five-year-old darts on slight span. Brilliant, brittle crane drum, Tall, hefty gist sight, Pitch in limns burns. With swish rifts. Wingbeats wheeze.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/1/2022 9:42:00 AM

She sounds so cute enjoy her I was close with my grandfather all my life . He died at 72 young for this day and age. Hugs and blessings Jennifer..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/31/2022 7:16:00 PM

Fairylike and all sweetness!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/30/2022 10:26:00 PM

The happiness come through Lasaad. I have 3 grandchildren and 4 greatgrandies also, they are hard work, but there is plenty of love, like your poem which is so pleasurable to read

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2022 7:26:00 AM

Creative work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. I did not have a granddaughter but have a daughter who has a step-granddaughter so we can enjoy her. I hope she grows up to be all she can be. I hope your granddaughter continues to do well. I have finished the sonnet, "The Unpainted Clapboard House" if you care to read the finished work. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2022 5:20:00 AM

They are adorable at any age but especially when young. I feel the pride and love floating in your words.

Valsa George

Date: 1/29/2022 8:45:00 PM

I am sure you enjoy the company of your playful grand daughter! A five year old will be usually so ebullient and adventurous ! The Grandfather in you can never feel bored in such a child's loving company !