Brand New Christmas Poem

The night before Christmas the moon glowed bright 
Children were caroling all through the night 
The elves were still working; making some toys 
For Santa to bring, to good girls and boys 

The clouds drifted slowly, so way up high
Dropping their snowflakes- that whitened the sky 
The world seemed quite quiet, silence in air 
Then, the wind whispered soft into my ear... 

Tomorrow is Christmas- ready or not 
Remind the people, what some have forgot 
Christmas is when Jesus was born this day
It's not just 'bout Santa- riding his sleigh 

And tell them the best gift to give is- "love" 
A whispered note, from the man up above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:24 PM
The reason for the season Charles, you're right. What a lovely poem. Years ago when I was in my 20's the whole congregation at Catholic mass sang Happy birthday softly at the end of the service. It sounds inappropriate somehow, but it was wonderful. I feel your last stanza and your last 2 lines, would make a sought after Christmas card.
Messina Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 3:18 AM
Christmas is by far my favorite holiday. The Christmas spirit that surrounds, the lights, the songs, everything that goes with it...my mom a born Jew converted to Catholicism when she married my dad. Funny, my live-in girlfriend of the past 10 years, a born catholic who converted to Jewish when she married her ex (lol). Have a great holiday season, Marikate...hugs Charlie :)
Sangster - K Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 2:45 AM
A beautiful poem and message :-) Love is the best gift of all. Cheers Anne :-)
Messina Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 3:49 AM
Yes, it is, Anne. Thank you so much for stopping by:-)
One Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Your sonnet is lovely for the time of the season and flows and rhymes really well..
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Thanks, S.O. Jingle all the way!
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:30 AM
Great message in your verse Charlie, some think it's all about tinsel and turkey. Tom
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Indeed, Tom. Have to remind some what Christmas is all about. Especially some of my kids (lol) Charlie
Gentile Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Charlie, you have certainly penned with clarity! The best gift is definitely love! A lovely Christmas poem indeed! Happy Tuesday !!
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:22 AM
No doubt! Thanks Mike. Happy Tuesday!! ...good to see you!
D. Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:10 AM
Beautiful! Love the spiritual message! Nicely written!
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Thank you, Lynn. I appreciate your visit and comments!
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