Branched Form

S urmount the branched form
A rise glorified reborn
V isage of man once torn
I conoclast earth adorned
O rdained light born
R eign as His firstborn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 7:58 PM
and also a monorhyme!! Too bad we cannot have two things named for "form" For example,sometimes I'll do a personification that is also sonnet, and I have to choose which of the two to state in the heading. Well, this was a great poem, Debs, Congrats on your win.
Taylor Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
Sweetheart Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Congrats Debbie on another amazing win in this contest .. wonderful words ..and message luv..
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Debbie
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 2:01 PM
oh my, a real creative shift, debs... must have been placed higher for me...congrats with love! :) huggs
Mehta Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 8:23 PM
Beautiful expressions, Deborah. Congrats for the win
Tugaff Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. More power and success. Ernilando
Culverhouse Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 4:24 AM
congrats on the win!! well done! enjoyed reading.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 2:40 AM
Congratulations Deborah, on your success in Brian’s An Easter Picture contest with this amazing poem. It's nice to see you winning here. It's wonderful, I must say! Your creativity shines. Love to you. Happily, Dane Ann
Villarosa Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 10:55 PM
A very worthy poem on this worthwhile reminiscing of our Saviour's sacred life. Congratulations on winning this contest, Deborah. (^_^) Noel.
Freeman Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Congratulations on your #2 Deb. Sincere, Agape, Moses
Lokken Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Very lovely verses, with a beautiful rhyme... Love,
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on your win for Brian's An Easter Picture Contest Deb. Love, Carol
Foster Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations Deborah. lovely words....Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations, Deb!!
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your win. Thank you for your comments. It was a challenging contest. We can all be proud. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Another tribute to your talent..congrats on your win in the contest. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 7:41 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem and placement in Brian's contest.. a wonderful win and beautiful words of your write.. enjoy this special win..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Strand Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest IDYLL is now open.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Beautiful words, Deborah. God is love and gives love...so do these words. Love, Dane
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 4:50 PM
And brought us in as sisters and brothers the adopted children of God...Keep the creative pen flowing..This write should do well in the contest. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 3:52 PM
great job, much success.
Murphy Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 1:22 PM
FIRST I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THIS WAS A NICE WRITE I ENJOYED IT SECOND I TRULY THANK YOU ON MY TONGUE TWISTER WIN TEARS OF JOY FLOODED MY FACE THANK YOU SO MUCH GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT THANK YOU
White Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 6:19 AM
Clever read
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