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Brainstorm Rainstorm

Brainstorm faith’s open palms vigilant in drought sunburns brighter, moonshines boozy grinning Rainstorm rustling the leaves slurry stirred by lightning overindulging town prayers applause

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Jack Ellison

Date: 7/6/2024 6:43:00 PM

Love your choice of descriptive phases! Have you had a chance to visit your museum yet... no pressure! When you get the chance dear Kim! Love these words (rustling the leaves slurry stirred by lightning) Cheers dear Kimmy xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2024 10:34:00 AM

I was a member for a year. Every year they do a reenactment of the shootout at the OK Corral. (I’ve been to the original location in Arizona too (my Aunt lives close). So when they have the shootout I will bring my grandsons. Also one of the bad guys who guns for Morgan Earp was taking questions, chose my grandson and was lol thrown by his name…also Morgan. Funny moment. Hugs-A-Million! :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/6/2024 8:02:00 AM

"Rainstorm rustling the leaves slurry stirred by lightning overindulging town prayers applause" -- Lovely, emotive writing. Great imagery. Yes, we can have too much of a good thing. The battle with the waistline.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2024 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Joe :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/6/2024 7:33:00 AM

the comparison Kim is so subtle, great poetry with images and aliterations, enjoyed yann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2024 9:47:00 AM

Thank you, Yann :)