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Brainstorm Rainstorm

Brainstorm
faith’s open palms
vigilant in drought
sunburns brighter, moonshines boozy
grinning

Rainstorm
rustling the leaves
 slurry stirred by lightning
overindulging town prayers
applause

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Jack Ellison

July 6, 2024 at 6:43 PM

Love your choice of descriptive phases! Have you had a chance to visit your museum yet... no pressure! When you get the chance dear Kim! Love these words (rustling the leaves slurry stirred by lightning) Cheers dear Kimmy xx

Kim Rodrigues

July 7, 2024 at 10:34 AM

I was a member for a year. Every year they do a reenactment of the shootout at the OK Corral. (I’ve been to the original location in Arizona too (my Aunt lives close). So when they have the shootout I will bring my grandsons. Also one of the bad guys who guns for Morgan Earp was taking questions, chose my grandson and was lol thrown by his name…also Morgan. Funny moment. Hugs-A-Million! :)

Joseph P. DiMino

July 6, 2024 at 8:02 AM

"Rainstorm rustling the leaves slurry stirred by lightning overindulging town prayers applause" -- Lovely, emotive writing. Great imagery. Yes, we can have too much of a good thing. The battle with the waistline.

Kim Rodrigues

July 6, 2024 at 9:49 AM

Thank you, Joe :)