Brainstorm Colors

Waking, she inspects the color under her sweater
and sighs that vague orange is still wearing her.
Orange can’t be her friend until it reveals its core.

While white is already a friend, the floating ones
aloofly speak of odd concerns she cannot pattern.
At times, float-whites hear, but never do they listen
or cease insisting that she has dreams, NOT visions.

Blue, green, pink and white all bring truths to her:
if she finds the correct umbrella, she could fly thru
blue-white skies adorned with smeared pink pops
over green’s velvet-thick and lush laid blankets.
When she gains the doors other side, freedom
will lead her to the right, flight-ready umbrella.

Sorting and storing colors keeps her busy all day.
Her favorites - blue, green, pink and white shades,
she tenderly places in see thru plastic jars, all
other colors she discards as too bland hearted.

Daily relief is happily seized by determining
not even a kernel of purple is in her world.
Purple startles, it is pain’s chosen dispersal 
that circles and circles until she curls up,
prone atop piles of her own broken pieces. 

Occupied with her color heaps, she spies a white-
float fluttering in her doorway at a time too early
for the syringe of colorless assistance 
that simplifies her organizational tasks.

She hears white make words but disappears
inside of all pink things with soft plumes.
“Both your parents came to visit with you.  
They are waiting inside the purple room.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 8:55 AM
I really like this for its imagery. it's pretty cool. i have questions for you in soupmail.
Neumann Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:12 AM
That is an amazing insight or your brain storms. Congratulations on you deserved win in the contest. I can't help to not think of rainbows, but of the strength of chakras shining through. Kind wishes, Kai
Radke Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem taking a first place win. Deb
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Yay! First place on the winner's list for you CayCay! Congratulations! I knew this one would rate high! xxoo : )
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 1:41 PM
- You write vividly and colorfully in the dark, CayCay - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:46 PM
Wonderful write CayCay, congratulations on your win...
Godwin Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Mr. Smith - I am delighted to have you here, on this particular poem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:39 PM
Cay Cay...thank you for entering this magnificent write, it was EXACTLY what I was hoping for! This poem has a future of more accolades to come, I can feel it! Congrats on a a great shared win!
Godwin Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Wow and wow, John - thank you. I regret not finding this until today, the 26th; I could have felt this delightful adrenaline rush yesterday. I am honored and thrilled, truly. Thank you for all the time you give to other Soupers - I know sponsoring contests has 'varied' moments, and I thank you for enduring them. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Radke Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Oh. This is so good. And perfectly describes the abstract of distraction. I loved your description of purple as pain's chosen dispersal and later when you use it as the color of the room where the parents are waiting. You get it so well. Best wishes. I think you will do very well in the contest. I'm very happy I read your poem tonight. Deb
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Colour your life with the best you can find CayCay including colourful people. Loved the late sixties early seventies when colour was also found in music. Orangge is my favourite colour. Quality write unscripted like a painting of the grandest hues. Regards David in NZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:30 PM
You let your words run free, unencumbered by any negativity. This is a very beautiful brainstorm CayCay which I believe I will see on the winner's list. I was wowed! xxoo ; )
Proxenos Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 2:10 AM
Salutations CayCay, your imagination is so vivid and your words so compelling and beautiful. I loved your poem. xoxo
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Multitude of colors paint your theme..wonderful depiction full of imagery..well done, CayCay.
Neumann Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 2:20 AM
Such a colourful storm. You are a painter with words...Many kind wishes, Kai
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 1:08 AM
Wow, a colourful verse for sure CayCay, I can only imagine what its like to have a brain storm but your verse has given me some idea. Good luck. Tom.
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Mind blowing poetry as well, Caycay! I think your sense of imagery is just fantastic here. the lines about purple and how the parents are waiting in a purple room. Seems so symbolic. Gosh, you describe a crazy mind so beautifully!!
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