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Brainstorm Colors

Waking, she inspects the color under her sweater and sighs that vague orange is still wearing her. Orange can’t be her friend until it reveals its core. While white is already a friend, the floating ones aloofly speak of odd concerns she cannot pattern. At times, float-whites hear, but never do they listen or cease insisting that she has dreams, NOT visions. Blue, green, pink and white all bring truths to her: if she finds the correct umbrella, she could fly thru blue-white skies adorned with smeared pink pops over green’s velvet-thick and lush laid blankets. When she gains the doors other side, freedom will lead her to the right, flight-ready umbrella. Sorting and storing colors keeps her busy all day. Her favorites - blue, green, pink and white shades, she tenderly places in see thru plastic jars, all other colors she discards as too bland hearted. Daily relief is happily seized by determining not even a kernel of purple is in her world. Purple startles, it is pain’s chosen dispersal that circles and circles until she curls up, prone atop piles of her own broken pieces. Occupied with her color heaps, she spies a white- float fluttering in her doorway at a time too early for the syringe of colorless assistance that simplifies her organizational tasks. She hears white make words but disappears inside of all pink things with soft plumes. “Both your parents came to visit with you. They are waiting inside the purple room.” ... CayCay Jennings October 4, 2018 First Place -- John Hamilton -- Brainstorm / Free Verse

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Date: 10/26/2018 11:12:00 AM
That is an amazing insight or your brain storms. Congratulations on you deserved win in the contest. I can't help to not think of rainbows, but of the strength of chakras shining through. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/25/2018 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem taking a first place win. Deb
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Date: 10/25/2018 4:48:00 PM
Yay! First place on the winner's list for you CayCay! Congratulations! I knew this one would rate high! xxoo : )
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Date: 10/25/2018 1:41:00 PM
- You write vividly and colorfully in the dark, CayCay - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2018 12:46:00 PM
Wonderful write CayCay, congratulations on your win...
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/26/2018 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Mr. Smith - I am delighted to have you here, on this particular poem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 10/25/2018 12:39:00 PM
Cay Cay...thank you for entering this magnificent write, it was EXACTLY what I was hoping for! This poem has a future of more accolades to come, I can feel it! Congrats on a a great shared win!
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Date: 10/26/2018 6:42:00 PM
Wow and wow, John - thank you. I regret not finding this until today, the 26th; I could have felt this delightful adrenaline rush yesterday. I am honored and thrilled, truly. Thank you for all the time you give to other Soupers - I know sponsoring contests has 'varied' moments, and I thank you for enduring them. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 10/18/2018 7:43:00 PM
Oh. This is so good. And perfectly describes the abstract of distraction. I loved your description of purple as pain's chosen dispersal and later when you use it as the color of the room where the parents are waiting. You get it so well. Best wishes. I think you will do very well in the contest. I'm very happy I read your poem tonight. Deb
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Date: 10/12/2018 5:19:00 PM
Colour your life with the best you can find CayCay including colourful people. Loved the late sixties early seventies when colour was also found in music. Orangge is my favourite colour. Quality write unscripted like a painting of the grandest hues. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 10/8/2018 3:30:00 PM
You let your words run free, unencumbered by any negativity. This is a very beautiful brainstorm CayCay which I believe I will see on the winner's list. I was wowed! xxoo ; )
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Date: 10/8/2018 2:10:00 AM
Salutations CayCay, your imagination is so vivid and your words so compelling and beautiful. I loved your poem. xoxo
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Date: 10/7/2018 6:48:00 AM
Multitude of colors paint your theme..wonderful depiction full of imagery..well done, CayCay.
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Date: 10/6/2018 2:20:00 AM
Such a colourful storm. You are a painter with words...Many kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/5/2018 1:08:00 AM
Wow, a colourful verse for sure CayCay, I can only imagine what its like to have a brain storm but your verse has given me some idea. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 10/4/2018 6:06:00 PM
Mind blowing poetry as well, Caycay! I think your sense of imagery is just fantastic here. the lines about purple and how the parents are waiting in a purple room. Seems so symbolic. Gosh, you describe a crazy mind so beautifully!!
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