Brainstorm a Poem

How little we know
How much we believe

truth ever changing in our mind
as new information arrives...and yet
minds can turn away from truths
emotion's hands are easy to follow
and sow doubt to cloud truths

we cling to our comfortable worlds of human folly
not understanding reality is always changing
life is always growing older
death is inevitable and brains are used more often to destroy
then create and build a flourishing environment

where does it leave us as we pass through life
oblivious to most things in creation
knowing only struggles in our own worldview
forgetting...we are only here once
as we waste precious time arguing over trivial matters
clinging on to strings wrapped around us
by our own small groups finding comfort from fear
in an unknown universe that gives life and takes life
without concern
where belief is more important than knowledge
easier to develop stories of eternal life
surrounded by winged creatures
than to stare into an abyss of reality

10/19/18
contest Brainstorm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Very true. Congratulations on your win and happy searching...Kai
Radke Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win. Your poem conveyed a strong message written beautifully. Deb
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 1:58 PM
- A poem of wise words and truths, Frederic :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Well done Frederic, another write...another win!
Onclaud Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:51 PM
the use of words could be a privilege or curse... wonderfully crafted, frederic... huggs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 8:30 AM
The intrinsic human condition, well done Frederick, good luck in the contest :) xomo
Vaso Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Mocking those abused here, not much of a brainstorm at all, I am surprised.
Vaso Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 11:22 PM
First this was about the blog post not this poem , second those abused often learn the behavior, an if you were beaten , no one deserves this of course, and I hope you have overcome it.
Parker Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:22 PM
as someone beaten by an abusive parent I have only one comment " really "
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 8:39 AM
I don't see it, to me this piece speaks to my 'too smart to function' notion of of us feeble fallible humans. I could be missing something. xomo
Sands Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 6:50 PM
The brainstorm of the powerful impact it has to face reality. Well done Frederic :)
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