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Brainstorm

Bit by bit I try… to seek help – But without any. My mind, already broken… it’s falling apart. To you, I’m silent… but I’m screaming inside, Seeking help… for my storming mind. I’ve lost my senses, I know… And that I haven’t any control Over my own thoughts and likes, For my mind paints pictures which I don’t understand. And my own thoughts leave me insane… Now I’m worse than a beggar: By the roadside I weep… praying to turn me into dust. I’m torn, crushed… and helpless, Yet I wander… seeking some help – wherever it may be. 10/20/2018

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Date: 10/29/2018 1:50:00 AM
That is a real life story. Reaching out and no one catches the hand. As one of my friends said about depression: one cannot chose the colour of the life boat. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 10/31/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Kai. Very much appreciated.
Date: 10/26/2018 3:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, well done Kaveesha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 10/31/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit.
Date: 10/25/2018 1:11:00 PM
Really good write Kaveesha, congrats on a fine placement!
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 10/31/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you John.

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