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Brainstorm

Brainstorm
No peace
Never rest
Trapped
Whirlwind anger and fear
Mind's eye blurring
Seething with hate
One hundred miles per hour
Consuming rage
What you have done
Can never be

Brainstorm
Blinding pain
No escaping
Mindless hopelessness
You beg forgiveness of me
That can never be
I'll have my revenge
Blood in my eyes

This storm will pass
When I lay you in a grave


Brainstorm Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton
10/05/18

Copyright © Timothy Mcguire | Year Posted 2018

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Kai Michael Neumann Date: 10/29/2018 1:46:00 AM Ouch. Congratulations on your win, Kai Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/29/2018 2:52:00 PM Thanks Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2018 3:28:00 AM - Some will never get peace ... they always strive with their storm Timothy - A good poem - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/26/2018 12:35:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise you are right

John Hamilton Date: 10/25/2018 1:08:00 PM Well done Timothy, congrats on a fine placement in my contest! Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/25/2018 3:01:00 PM Thanks John!

Deb Radke Date: 10/18/2018 7:32:00 PM This is very good and describes precisely what I imagine a storm of the brain to be. Best wishes. Deb Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/18/2018 7:50:00 PM Thanks Deb

Line Gauthier Date: 10/6/2018 8:45:00 PM Remind me to never get on your bad side, Timothy. LOL Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2018 5:41:00 AM Your comment reminds me of a really dark poem I wrote on the theme of halloween in the first person because I liked the way it sounded. I posted it hoping people would realize it was a poem and not a page from my diary. LOL Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/6/2018 11:11:00 PM :) Funny. Sometimes I think a long time before posting some dark stuff. I don't want people to think bad if me. I just love the power of words. Good words and bad words. I'm really a Teddy Bear with a lot of love to pass out. Here is some for your visit and kind remarks <3