Timothy Mcguire Poet Free verse

Brainstorm

Brainstorm
No peace
Never rest
Trapped
Whirlwind anger and fear
Mind's eye blurring
Seething with hate
One hundred miles per hour
Consuming rage
What you have done
Can never be

Brainstorm
Blinding pain
No escaping
Mindless hopelessness
You beg forgiveness of me
That can never be
I'll have my revenge
Blood in my eyes

This storm will pass
When I lay you in a grave


Brainstorm Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton
10/05/18

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Kai Michael Neumann October 29, 2018 at 1:46 AM Ouch. Congratulations on your win, Kai Timothy Mcguire October 29, 2018 at 2:52 PM Thanks Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2018 at 3:28 AM - Some will never get peace ... they always strive with their storm Timothy - A good poem - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Timothy Mcguire October 26, 2018 at 12:35 PM Thank you Anne-Lise you are right

John Hamilton October 25, 2018 at 1:08 PM Well done Timothy, congrats on a fine placement in my contest! Timothy Mcguire October 25, 2018 at 3:01 PM Thanks John!

Deb Radke October 18, 2018 at 7:32 PM This is very good and describes precisely what I imagine a storm of the brain to be. Best wishes. Deb Timothy Mcguire October 18, 2018 at 7:50 PM Thanks Deb

Line Gauthier October 6, 2018 at 8:45 PM Remind me to never get on your bad side, Timothy. LOL Line Gauthier October 16, 2018 at 5:41 AM Your comment reminds me of a really dark poem I wrote on the theme of halloween in the first person because I liked the way it sounded. I posted it hoping people would realize it was a poem and not a page from my diary. LOL Timothy Mcguire October 6, 2018 at 11:11 PM :) Funny. Sometimes I think a long time before posting some dark stuff. I don't want people to think bad if me. I just love the power of words. Good words and bad words. I'm really a Teddy Bear with a lot of love to pass out. Here is some for your visit and kind remarks <3