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Brainstorm

Brainstorm No peace Never rest Trapped Whirlwind anger and fear Mind's eye blurring Seething with hate One hundred miles per hour Consuming rage What you have done Can never be Brainstorm Blinding pain No escaping Mindless hopelessness You beg forgiveness of me That can never be I'll have my revenge Blood in my eyes This storm will pass When I lay you in a grave Brainstorm Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton 10/05/18

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/29/2018 1:46:00 AM

Ouch. Congratulations on your win, Kai

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/29/2018 2:52:00 PM

Thanks Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2018 3:28:00 AM

- Some will never get peace ... they always strive with their storm Timothy - A good poem - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/26/2018 12:35:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise you are right

John Hamilton

Date: 10/25/2018 1:08:00 PM

Well done Timothy, congrats on a fine placement in my contest!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/25/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thanks John!

Deb Radke

Date: 10/18/2018 7:32:00 PM

This is very good and describes precisely what I imagine a storm of the brain to be. Best wishes. Deb

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/18/2018 7:50:00 PM

Thanks Deb

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/6/2018 8:45:00 PM

Remind me to never get on your bad side, Timothy. LOL

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 5:41:00 AM

Your comment reminds me of a really dark poem I wrote on the theme of halloween in the first person because I liked the way it sounded. I posted it hoping people would realize it was a poem and not a page from my diary. LOL

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/6/2018 11:11:00 PM

:) Funny. Sometimes I think a long time before posting some dark stuff. I don't want people to think bad if me. I just love the power of words. Good words and bad words. I'm really a Teddy Bear with a lot of love to pass out. Here is some for your visit and kind remarks <3