Gregory Richard Barden Poet Free verse

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Brain Un-Freeze - 13

~     Psychosis, carnal -


                         seesaw hips ...


               melt my manic mass.     ~




~ 1st Place ~  in the "Magicicada 13 - Body and Mind" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavy, Sponsor.

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Duncan Chappell July 24, 2018 at 10:57 AM a great poem so worth the win god bless Gregory Richard Barden July 26, 2018 at 2:22 AM Thank you so much, Duncan - best wishes! :-)

Susan Gentry July 2, 2018 at 4:37 PM Congratulations on your #1 win! Unsettling somehow. :) Gregory Richard Barden July 2, 2018 at 4:51 PM Thank you, Susan ... it's just about being attracted to the way a woman walks, nothing dark in this one. ;-)

Mick Talbot July 2, 2018 at 11:25 AM Lascivious grace, in words, amazing, congratulations Gregory, 1st place in my book too! Gregory Richard Barden July 2, 2018 at 11:50 AM Very kind of you, Mick, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, my friend! :-)

Gershon Wolf July 1, 2018 at 11:19 PM Wicked … wanton … worthiest of its richly deserved podium prize. Hats off to you, my friend, Gershon Gregory Richard Barden July 2, 2018 at 11:49 AM Thanks you very much, My Poet Bro - blessings! :-)

Paul Callus July 1, 2018 at 5:34 PM This is good and creative, Gregory. Superb end line, including the flowing alliteration. Congrats on placing first. Regards // paul Gregory Richard Barden July 2, 2018 at 11:49 AM Many kind thanks, Paul, I greatly appreciate it! :-)

Paul Marc July 1, 2018 at 4:27 PM Great image/poem - congrats on your win! Gregory Richard Barden July 2, 2018 at 11:49 AM Thank you so very much, PM! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 1, 2018 at 2:47 PM Swish...Slippery when whet. ;) Congratulations on your first place finish! xomo <3 Gregory Richard Barden July 2, 2018 at 11:47 AM Thank you so much, Mo - I was very happy to be placed so high, and thankful you liked it! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2018 at 8:00 PM oh my, that picture really goes well with it. Such an eerie write, Greg! Gregory Richard Barden July 2, 2018 at 11:46 AM Thank you so much, Andrea! :-) <3